Comments on: Haiku Review Contest

By: Joshua Bimes

Joshua Bimes — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 14:30:15 +0000

Oops.

Spear. Twenty Dollars
Warded Circle. Eight Dollars
This Review. Priceless

Inspiration with improper count, worthless

By: Joshua Bimes

Joshua Bimes — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 14:28:54 +0000

Spear. Twenty Dollars.

Warded Circle. Eight Dollars

Haiku Review. Priceless

if only I’d been inspired before the deadline.

By: Peat

Peat — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 00:36:46 +0000

Thanks to everyone who participated! I will be taking the weekend to judge, and will announce the winners soon.

Kevin, your entries were a little late, but I will let you off on a time-zone technicality. I agree with you about Jennifer’s poem. More on that soon.

By: Kevin

Kevin — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 06:52:32 +0000

And before I run out of time, I’d like to submit one more:

Yes, ma’am. All over.
Wow! Wards everywhere? Even—
I have one there too (;

I hope smiley faces don’t count as a syllable!

Oh oh , and I think Jennifer’s poem is amazing.

By: Kevin

Kevin — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 06:46:06 +0000

Oh crap! Does the contest stop at the end of the day, June 17th Eastern Time? It’s still the 17th where I am!

By: Kevin

Kevin — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 06:42:50 +0000

If demons too long
one spends fighting, a demon
not long one’ll become

By: Jason

Jason — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 18:31:12 +0000

Fearing the dark night
Finding courage and ones self
Facing great trials

By: Daniel Smith

Daniel Smith — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 17:20:23 +0000

His name is Arlen.
He likes to beat up corelings.
What’s up with Jardir?

Arlen’s got time off.
He’s staying inside the Core.
Demons run a mile.

“If it was you out there…
I swear I would fight like mad…”
Yeah right, Jeph. Yeah right.

Poor little Rojer.
Stuck with Sweetsong as master…
Play, fiddler boy!

Mmm, herb gatherer.
Not Leesha, the older one.
She’s some piece of ass.

That’s all for now, folks!
I couldn’t think of clever ones…
It’s a good book, though.

By: Hon Yip

Hon Yip — Tue, 16 Jun 2009 16:33:46 +0000

I hope you don’t mind me taking the liberty of submitting another entry. This time, I wrote it to describe actually reading your work:

By: Lucille Powell

Lucille Powell — Sun, 14 Jun 2009 17:47:23 +0000

Demons rise nightly
Humans using talismans
War has just begun