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		<title>Comment on The Daylight War is Over! by Peter V Brett :: Peephole In My Skull</title>
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		<dc:creator>Peter V Brett :: Peephole In My Skull</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 May 2012 12:01:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] CycleWilliam on Create Your Own Coreling Entry: Chameleon Demon or Veiled Corelinglogankstewart on The Daylight War is Over!Bruce Collier on Contest: Create Your Own CorelingDustin on Graphic Audio Releases The Desert Spear [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Daylight War Release Dates and The Demon Cycle by G.R. Velikanje</title>
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		<dc:creator>G.R. Velikanje</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 May 2012 03:03:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ive been reading sci fi and fantasy since 1949 Ive followed the evolution of many authors.You sir have started at a very high level and will obviously thrill your followers as your art blossoms,I don&#039;t care how long it takes as long as the delightful quality continues. thank you so much for your concepts as they are new and a delight to an old jade such as myself.....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ive been reading sci fi and fantasy since 1949 Ive followed the evolution of many authors.You sir have started at a very high level and will obviously thrill your followers as your art blossoms,I don&#8217;t care how long it takes as long as the delightful quality continues. thank you so much for your concepts as they are new and a delight to an old jade such as myself&#8230;..</p>
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		<title>Comment on Create Your Own Coreling Entry: Chameleon Demon or Veiled Coreling by William</title>
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		<dc:creator>William</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 May 2012 11:42:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hound demons:
Hound Demons are about the size of a pony but with a longer and thinner body cover in leathery and scaly skin that ranges from black to browny orange color. The scales cover its neck and chest area as well as on the outer thighs of the demon and the belly; knees to feet, tail and face are covered with a leathery skin. The tail is similar to that of a cat long and lithe, providing balance and agility. Its ears come out from the side of its head constantly turning and listening for unwary prey and while the Hound Demon lacks eyes it makes up for it will a great sense of smell that comes from two slits running from where the eyes would be to where the tip of the snout. The Hound Demons teeth

The Hound Demon is the ultimate hunting dog with the ability to hear and smell prey from up to a kilometer or more away. Once they have found the prey they are hunting they can run with ease to catch a person on foot or at maximum speed to catch a mounted rider and maintain that speed for several kilometers. Even if the person escapes that night they can pick up the scent and follow it the next night and repeat this process until they prey is found. The Hound Demon is teeth are strong enough to bite through wood and have a grip a strong as a crocodile, not letting go until killed. The last of their known strengths is to have resistance to fire, similar to that of a rock demon.

Despite their many strengths they have weaknesses with the main being their deterrent to water, such as that of a river of a lake, preventing them from reaching places like Fort Laketon and crossing the Dividing River and the fact that they cannot swim. The Hound Demons sense of smell has also been known to work against it with strong smells that can be made by Herb Gatherers serving a limited deterrent. The lack of its eyes means it cannot actually see things only anticipate which way people are coming from, this means that if it is hit from a distance with an arrow it cannot actually dodge the arrow, that marksman would have to be a kilometer away of course. The only other weakness these demons have is the lack of armor in some areas, however even in these areas only a direct hit from an arrow or spear will do it any damage.

A Hound Demons can live in the mountains, on the plains and in the outer forest but prefers more open space for easier hunting but if determined will follow prey into deeper parts of the forests. Due to the fact that they cannot cross running water where they rise will tend to be where they will hunt to until the next night where they can pick up the scent again. Hound Demons prefer the greener lands over the deserts of Fort Krasia.

The Hound Demons armor is strongest on the front of the body and on the thighs however the skin too is strong and will resist all but direct blows from an arrow or spear. The place with the least amount of armor is the tail so it can give the Hound Demon maximum balance while chasing down prey.

Hound Demons like Mimics are usually under the control of a Mind Demon, however they do like most other demons roam on their own hunting for prey. A Hound Demon is used mainly for tracking down targets for Mind Demons and can drag them to the Core if needed. When hunting their prey they stalk it until close enough to charge in a catch the targeted prey unaware and strangely, when hunting under the control of a Mind Demon they will ignore all other people apart from those they are hunting unless provoked.

Short story:
From the shadows of Core the Mind Demon watched through the unique vision of the eyeless Hounds as they chased down their prey in the newly fallen night. It had been patient waiting for the wards to fail or for him to leave for supplies. It had slowly pushed through the wards with its mind and instilled fear, and now watched him run and waited.

Eran ran as fast as he could, body running on mostly adrenaline. The village of Cutters Hollow could only be a few more kilometers away. The wards around his farm had failed and he needed to get the book somewhere safe. As he ran the adrenaline he felt slowly began to fade and he began to tire, running slower and slower until he was reduced to as fast a walk as he could manage.
A bone chilling howl rose up on the wind and Eran’s head snapped back, they were closing in on him. He pushed himself into as fast a run as he could manage. In his mind he begged the Creator to let him reach safety in time and as the thought crossed his mind he spied lights in the distance and his hope soared.
The Creator was with him as he ran within mere twenty meters of safety before one of the Hound Demons leaped at him from the darkness, knocking him over. Two more appeared behind him. An ambush and he had been so close. They stalked around him before attacking again, tearing at his stomach and legs. He felt the flesh of his body being torn apart but suddenly the tearing stopped and a calming music filled the air, through one eye he saw the demons looking interested in something else but not a dark interest, more curious. The music went from a calm melody to a sudden a deathly haunting tune and the demons backed away. Eran’s mind was fading too much to care by know but he felt someone rap a cloth around him and a voice said, “Take him to the hospit and have one of my apprentices treat his wounds.” There was no reply but he was lifted up by strong arms and taken into the warded village.

Fury ran through the Mind Demon in the darkness of the Core his mental cry caused even a Rock Demon to roar in pain. At his order the Hound Demons dematerialized and sank back down into the Core but one remained until sunrise to watch and wait, sitting on the very edge of the wards, there would be other nights with more successful hunts.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hound demons:<br />
Hound Demons are about the size of a pony but with a longer and thinner body cover in leathery and scaly skin that ranges from black to browny orange color. The scales cover its neck and chest area as well as on the outer thighs of the demon and the belly; knees to feet, tail and face are covered with a leathery skin. The tail is similar to that of a cat long and lithe, providing balance and agility. Its ears come out from the side of its head constantly turning and listening for unwary prey and while the Hound Demon lacks eyes it makes up for it will a great sense of smell that comes from two slits running from where the eyes would be to where the tip of the snout. The Hound Demons teeth</p>
<p>The Hound Demon is the ultimate hunting dog with the ability to hear and smell prey from up to a kilometer or more away. Once they have found the prey they are hunting they can run with ease to catch a person on foot or at maximum speed to catch a mounted rider and maintain that speed for several kilometers. Even if the person escapes that night they can pick up the scent and follow it the next night and repeat this process until they prey is found. The Hound Demon is teeth are strong enough to bite through wood and have a grip a strong as a crocodile, not letting go until killed. The last of their known strengths is to have resistance to fire, similar to that of a rock demon.</p>
<p>Despite their many strengths they have weaknesses with the main being their deterrent to water, such as that of a river of a lake, preventing them from reaching places like Fort Laketon and crossing the Dividing River and the fact that they cannot swim. The Hound Demons sense of smell has also been known to work against it with strong smells that can be made by Herb Gatherers serving a limited deterrent. The lack of its eyes means it cannot actually see things only anticipate which way people are coming from, this means that if it is hit from a distance with an arrow it cannot actually dodge the arrow, that marksman would have to be a kilometer away of course. The only other weakness these demons have is the lack of armor in some areas, however even in these areas only a direct hit from an arrow or spear will do it any damage.</p>
<p>A Hound Demons can live in the mountains, on the plains and in the outer forest but prefers more open space for easier hunting but if determined will follow prey into deeper parts of the forests. Due to the fact that they cannot cross running water where they rise will tend to be where they will hunt to until the next night where they can pick up the scent again. Hound Demons prefer the greener lands over the deserts of Fort Krasia.</p>
<p>The Hound Demons armor is strongest on the front of the body and on the thighs however the skin too is strong and will resist all but direct blows from an arrow or spear. The place with the least amount of armor is the tail so it can give the Hound Demon maximum balance while chasing down prey.</p>
<p>Hound Demons like Mimics are usually under the control of a Mind Demon, however they do like most other demons roam on their own hunting for prey. A Hound Demon is used mainly for tracking down targets for Mind Demons and can drag them to the Core if needed. When hunting their prey they stalk it until close enough to charge in a catch the targeted prey unaware and strangely, when hunting under the control of a Mind Demon they will ignore all other people apart from those they are hunting unless provoked.</p>
<p>Short story:<br />
From the shadows of Core the Mind Demon watched through the unique vision of the eyeless Hounds as they chased down their prey in the newly fallen night. It had been patient waiting for the wards to fail or for him to leave for supplies. It had slowly pushed through the wards with its mind and instilled fear, and now watched him run and waited.</p>
<p>Eran ran as fast as he could, body running on mostly adrenaline. The village of Cutters Hollow could only be a few more kilometers away. The wards around his farm had failed and he needed to get the book somewhere safe. As he ran the adrenaline he felt slowly began to fade and he began to tire, running slower and slower until he was reduced to as fast a walk as he could manage.<br />
A bone chilling howl rose up on the wind and Eran’s head snapped back, they were closing in on him. He pushed himself into as fast a run as he could manage. In his mind he begged the Creator to let him reach safety in time and as the thought crossed his mind he spied lights in the distance and his hope soared.<br />
The Creator was with him as he ran within mere twenty meters of safety before one of the Hound Demons leaped at him from the darkness, knocking him over. Two more appeared behind him. An ambush and he had been so close. They stalked around him before attacking again, tearing at his stomach and legs. He felt the flesh of his body being torn apart but suddenly the tearing stopped and a calming music filled the air, through one eye he saw the demons looking interested in something else but not a dark interest, more curious. The music went from a calm melody to a sudden a deathly haunting tune and the demons backed away. Eran’s mind was fading too much to care by know but he felt someone rap a cloth around him and a voice said, “Take him to the hospit and have one of my apprentices treat his wounds.” There was no reply but he was lifted up by strong arms and taken into the warded village.</p>
<p>Fury ran through the Mind Demon in the darkness of the Core his mental cry caused even a Rock Demon to roar in pain. At his order the Hound Demons dematerialized and sank back down into the Core but one remained until sunrise to watch and wait, sitting on the very edge of the wards, there would be other nights with more successful hunts.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Daylight War is Over! by logankstewart</title>
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		<dc:creator>logankstewart</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 May 2012 14:42:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Awesome, Peat!  I&#039;ve been anxiously awaiting TDW, and now that there&#039;s a date, I&#039;m super excited.  Congratulations, and thanks for crafting such wonderful stories.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awesome, Peat!  I&#8217;ve been anxiously awaiting TDW, and now that there&#8217;s a date, I&#8217;m super excited.  Congratulations, and thanks for crafting such wonderful stories.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Contest: Create Your Own Coreling by Bruce Collier</title>
		<link>http://www.petervbrett.com/2012/04/18/contest-create-your-own-coreling/comment-page-1/#comment-9359</link>
		<dc:creator>Bruce Collier</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 May 2012 12:39:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hexa demon

The Hexa demons are all the same size and shape, they are 1 foot by 1 foot hexagonal tubes that are often found near volcanos. They have taken their shape and size to camouflage them selves with the basalt stone columns that grow near Volcanos. 

Each Hexa has 6 limbs, all can be used as feet or hands. Each of their hands are six pronged claws capable of grasping objects with enhanced dexterity , running with speed along the ground or up or down cliffs. Their favorite pass time when they are not maiming any living thing is cartwheeling down sheer cliffs. Their eyes are their only weakness, they have two eyes similar to a fish&#039;s, one eye on each side of their body, this creates small blind spots on each of their sides.

Individually the Hexa&#039;s are easily fought, however on mass they will easily over power the stoutest fighter. With their six limbs they will launch them selves at you grabbing you with as many limbs as they can weighing your body down, with their spare limbs they will tear chunks of flesh from your body. The sight of blood will send them into a rage induced furry making them even more violent and vicious like the sharks of the ocean.

Although they have no mouths it is theorised they take sustenance through their limbs. With no mouths they cant make noise as the other demons can however through slapping their bodies, rubbing their arms together and even making clicking and clapping sounds they can communicate efficiently. Before they attack they often make eerie humming noises to scare their intended victims by vibrating their limbs in harmony.

When threatened they can form defensive or offensive structures by holding hands of their brothers and sisters, working with one mind to achieve their goal. They can form basic shapes or even bipedal monstrosities, with enough Hexa&#039;s working together they can make any shape.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hexa demon</p>
<p>The Hexa demons are all the same size and shape, they are 1 foot by 1 foot hexagonal tubes that are often found near volcanos. They have taken their shape and size to camouflage them selves with the basalt stone columns that grow near Volcanos. </p>
<p>Each Hexa has 6 limbs, all can be used as feet or hands. Each of their hands are six pronged claws capable of grasping objects with enhanced dexterity , running with speed along the ground or up or down cliffs. Their favorite pass time when they are not maiming any living thing is cartwheeling down sheer cliffs. Their eyes are their only weakness, they have two eyes similar to a fish&#8217;s, one eye on each side of their body, this creates small blind spots on each of their sides.</p>
<p>Individually the Hexa&#8217;s are easily fought, however on mass they will easily over power the stoutest fighter. With their six limbs they will launch them selves at you grabbing you with as many limbs as they can weighing your body down, with their spare limbs they will tear chunks of flesh from your body. The sight of blood will send them into a rage induced furry making them even more violent and vicious like the sharks of the ocean.</p>
<p>Although they have no mouths it is theorised they take sustenance through their limbs. With no mouths they cant make noise as the other demons can however through slapping their bodies, rubbing their arms together and even making clicking and clapping sounds they can communicate efficiently. Before they attack they often make eerie humming noises to scare their intended victims by vibrating their limbs in harmony.</p>
<p>When threatened they can form defensive or offensive structures by holding hands of their brothers and sisters, working with one mind to achieve their goal. They can form basic shapes or even bipedal monstrosities, with enough Hexa&#8217;s working together they can make any shape.</p>
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