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I read every review of my books.

I’ve been told by many people, including a few well-known authors, that this is a bad practice. Some call it masturbation and others call it masochism, but whatever you label it, I can’t help myself. When you spend thousands of hours toiling on something, it’s hard to pretend you don’t care what people think. I care. So I go on Amazon and B&N and Goodreads and have google scour the internets and when a new review pops up, I read it.

I am fortunate that mostly they are positive things that give me joy and encouragement to keep up at what I’m doing. Other times they are critical in a fair way, and give me ideas about how to improve my craft in the future. No one likes to have their weaknesses pointed out publicly, but I think it’s worth the price if it makes me a better author.

And sometimes, reviews kick me square in the nuts. People get angry about my choice of POV character, or who slept with who, or whatever, and say some mean and hurtful things. A lot of times these reviewers don’t even know what they’re talking about, having read more into the story that was actually there, ignored sections of the text that counter their arguments, approached it with a chip on their shoulder that I accidentally knocked off, or whatever. But even when I can see this and know that I wouldn’t change the book even if I could, it stings a bit, and sometimes throws me into a funk that can last for hours, especially since I know there’s no point in responding to defend it. It’s like knowing a bully is picking on your kid at school and not being allowed to go beat him up yourself.

You have to take the bad with the good.

I know I took some chances with The Desert Spear. I didn’t want to just repeat the formula of The Warded Man, however successful it might have been. I already wrote that book, and had no interest in writing it again. I wanted to do something different. I knew this would elate some readers and piss others off. Such is the risk an author takes when they roll the dice and send a manuscript out. It’s been interesting to see the progression of reviews from one book to the next.

I used to post every single review here on the blog, but I just don’t have that kind of time anymore, but here are some recent reviews that injected a little joy into my life:

The other night at Balticon while playing arm candy to the lovely and talented NYT Bestselling author Gail Carriger, I gave a copy of The Warded Man to Howard Tayler, the Schlock Mercenary. He has since called it the best convention swag ever.

Bookish Ardour reviews both The Painted Man and The Desert Spear.

Dave Brendon was one of my very first reviewers and conducted my first online interview. He had to wait a bit to get The Desert Spear down in South Africa, but he finished it this week and wrote this great review.

Jessica Strider is a Canadian bookseller and one of the nicest ladies you’ll ever meet. She runs a site called Sci-Fi Fan Letter where she reviewed The Warded Man last year and did an interview with me. Here she reviews The Desert Spear.

Mark the Walker of Worlds wrote a kickass Desert Spear review recently as well.

Okay, enough masochistic masturbation. I have a Daylight War to fight…

Posted on June 4, 2010 at 2:05 pm by PeatB
Filed under Desert Spear, Musings, Reviews, Writing
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iPad Writing, Pt. 1

So I decided today was the day to test out the new iPad for some “real” (i.e. Daylight War) writing. I’ve had it a full seven days now, but in all honesty, it had become My Precious after only one. It arrived on Thursday, which gave me just enough time to get it all synced and loaded up for my trip to Balticon. This was manna from Heaven, as I was otherwise planning to lug my ancient, slow, heavy, miserable excuse for a laptop along to the con.

Now I never need to take that shitty laptop anywhere ever again.

Using the iPad has been a pure pleasure. It was quick and uneventful to set up, and easy to intuit its use, even for a lifelong PC like me. The few things that confused me were figured out in just a few minutes, the most complicated of them being the mail on my @www.petervbrett.com account, which wouldn’t send until I spent about 20 minutes fiddling with the settings. If it was a Windows device, that probably would have taken days, and forced me to consult online forums, tech-savvy friends, and eventually wait hours on some corespawned IT call routed from Delhi.

I used the device pretty much nonstop over the weekend, blowing through my allotted 250MB of 3G service ($14.99/mo) in about 36 hours. I switched to the unlimited plan ($30/mo), but I just heard that has been canceled. Feh.

Still, the 3G is impressively fast, and unlike my phone, the iPad really brings the full breadth of the internet to your fingertips, from surfing to blogging to streaming video. Sometimes it seemed faster than my high speed internet at home. I attributed this to being in Maryland where the demands on the 3G service are less than in NYC, but there has been no appreciable slowing since I got back to Brooklyn.

But for all its wonders, the real reason I was willing to spend a small fortune on this device (over $1000, including the wireless keyboard and slim rubberized case) was so that I could write on it. I’ve lately been dissatisfied with my iPaq 910 smartphone (used to write much of The Desert Spear), which requires an increasing number of reboots and maintenance as time goes on. Plus the QWERTY keyboard is just too damn small. Barely 2/3 the size of the keyboard on the iPaq 6515, which is the device I used to write about 60% of The Painted Man. The screen on the 910 is likewise a fucking joke. I would have gotten an iPhone, but after testing other people’s, I decided the tiny virtual keyboard wouldn’t cut it, and the word processing apps were pretty much nonexistent.

I’ve been waiting for a tablet-style device that could hold its own, and after playing with my partner in crime’s iPad for about 10 seconds, I thought it might have finally arrived.

I started the morning by charging the device and importing the necessary word documents into the Pages App. While I waited, I registered to appear at Worldcon in Melbourne, Australia this September. If you’re in Australia, or always wanted to go, you should think about joining me. It will be epic.

Anyway, the early prep showed me the first weakness of the iPad as a writing tool. Unlike the iPaq, which syncs MSOffice files relatively smoothly with my desktop, Pages requires manual import and export of files, which involves conversion of the file and usually results in some fonts/features being lost. This is a pain in the ass. I can just plug in the iPaq and with Windows Mobile it will replace the older file on either the desktop or phone with the most recent one without me having to do anything. With Pages/iTunes, there are like 6 manual steps. I’m sure I will soon be doing them faster than a marine can put together his rifle, but still, this is a BIG negative. Sooner or later, it will result in me going out with the wrong version of the file, or losing some data. I just know it.

Once my prep was done, I went out for a hike in the park to find a quiet place to write. It was a gorgeous sunny day, not too hot at about 80 degrees. I walked about 4 miles before finding a nice shady spot, deliberately away from bikini-clad sun-worshipers who I knew would distract the hell out of me. I sat down and gave my e-mail a quick check, then opened up my active chapter file.

The virtual keyboard on the iPad did take some getting used to, but not as much as I’d feared, and I was soon typing at a fair clip. I wrote for about an hour, working on a Renna/Arlen scene. I knocked out 573 words in that time. Not too bad.

Things I liked:

1) In landscape mode, the virtual keyboard was quite wide and responsive, and typos were at a surprising minimum.

2) The screen is big and beautiful, allowing a MUCH better writing/editing experience than the phone.

3) Spell check.

4) Speedy touch scrolling with the Navigator feature.

5) Feeling like I was using one of those little pads they have on Star Trek: The Next Generation

6) The jealous envy of everyone around me.

Things I didn’t like:

1) In portrait mode, the virtual keyboard is less easy to use. Too wide to type comfortably with just your thumbs, but not wide enough to type with two full hands. I ended up doing an awkward one-handed type while holding the device in the other hand. I will get faster at this with practice, but it’s going to be an uphill climb.

2) The virtual keyboard doesn’t have arrow keys, so the only way to move the cursor around is by taking your hands off the keyboard and touching the screen. I suppose I will get used to this too, but so far I have found it really annoying.

3) The apostrophe is not on the main alphabet keyboard, so you have to shift to the alternate numbers keyboard to use it. This seems pretty dumb to me. The apostrophe isn’t a shift key on a standard keyboard for a reason: it gets used a LOT. Why make it hard on the typist? Every time I have to toggle keyboards, it breaks my stride. It’s one thing to do it for numbers, but not for basic punctuation.

4) Pages doesn’t have a word count feature, so I didn’t know how much I had written until I came home, exported the file to my desktop, opened it in Word, and ran a count. Then I had to import it back to the device. That’s really annoying.

5) Pages doesn’t have a track changes feature (though to be fair neither does Office Mobile).

Potential trouble:

The ease with which the iPad can shift to web-browsing, e-mail, facebook, video, iBooks, and twitter takes away one of the main advantages of writing on the move: the absence of distractions.

Overall, I found writing on the iPad a positive, hopeful experience, FAR more comfortable than typing on the smartphone. The negatives are considerable, but I expect that at least some of them will be addressed in future versions of Pages or some word processing app still in development.

I’ll update further as I continue my experiments. I plan to write outside as much as possible this summer, and the iPad makes it simple to do almost anything I could do from my full desktop wherever I go.

Freedom!

Posted on June 3, 2010 at 12:47 am by PeatB
Filed under Craft, Musings, My Reviews, Tech, Writing
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Card Sharp

I’m slowly recovering from Balticon, where copious amounts of alcohol and time spent in the company of the awesome likes of Gail Carriger, Paolo Bacigalupi, Mur Lafftery, Myke Cole, and a few dozen others drowned out the desperate cries of my aging body for sleep. I’ll admit to not having accomplished much today, but fuck it. I earned a slow day. Overall it was a great con, even though I booked it too late to make it onto the program. In some ways that was just as well, since I didn’t need to perform, and could just spend my time meeting cool people like John Anealio. I still have his rendition of “George RR Martin is Not Your Bitch” stuck in my head, especially after the crowd at the I Should be Writing podcast started singing along.

But I’m back in business now, and want to remind everyone about the ongoing Warding Contest. All you need to do is download the Ward Symbols from my site, and use them to make something to cause the local corelings to piss their metaphorical pants. Snap a picture of your warded whatever and send toΒ peat@www.petervbrett.com no later than July 1, 2010 along with your name and address. I will likely post an edited version of your e-mail, but won’t include your full name or address. Prizes include 5 prints of Lauren K Cannon’s fantastic Renna painting, which now graces the home page and anchors my site design, as well as signed copies of The Desert Spear.

If you need inspiration, look no further than two-time contest winner Dwayne from the UK:

Hi Peat,
Its me again. Firstly I would like to tell you how much I love The Desert Spear. It turned Jardir into my favorite character and moved him away from the villain he was shown as in the first book. But I digress, here are my entries for the warding contest.

Its consists of a idea I had to create warded cards. So I created old time/scroll like paper and drew wards on each of them. The idea of the warded card are:

a) Can be used to create ward nets
b) Can be used as a projectile
c) Can create a messenger circle
d) Trading cards
e) They look cool
f) Best weapon for the Warded Jongleur

They can be arranged in a multitude of different ways for different effects. I also coated them in the liquid I stole from a number of glow sticks allowing them to glow in the dark, but alas it wouldn’t show up on camera but I assure you it was magnificently awesome.

Here is the link to the group of pictures, I have my friend the Warded Jongleur help me model them.

I hope you enjoy them.
Dwayne

Dwayne always has great entries, and he attended my London signing a few weeks ago, which makes him extra awesome.

Posted on June 1, 2010 at 6:03 pm by PeatB
Filed under Contests, Craft, Fan Art, Fans, Warded Art
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Arlen’s Messenger Journal

Another awesome entry in the Warding Contest, this one from Aussie Lauren, hereafter known as Lauren Down Under, who despite her obvious affinity for warding and immense creativity, is not to be confused with Lauren K. Cannon, ward artist extraordinaire and co-judge of the contest.

Take it away, Lauren:

Hi Peat,

Here’s my entry for the Warding Contest. I decided to ward a leather journal based on what I imagined Arlen’s messenger journal would be like, complete with faux blood, gore & travel stains!

Hope you like it πŸ™‚

With much fan-girl adoration,

Lauren

That’s all for now. I am off to Baltimore tomorrow at dawn for Balticon, followed by some impromptu signings in Maryland and DC. I’ll be back Tuesday.

I did get my iPad today, though, and am interested to see how well I can blog from it, so there may be updates over the weekend. Keep sending in those warding entries! They bring immense joy to my soul.

Posted on May 28, 2010 at 12:58 am by PeatB
Filed under Appearances, Contests, Craft, Events, Fan Art, Fans, Messenger, Warded Art, World Traveler
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Alagai Hora

Woke up this morning feeling crappy. Not sure if it’s just allergies/exhaustion or a cold coming on, but of course it happens right before I head down to Baltimore for 5 days to attend Balticon.

So I was grumpy, until two awesome things happened. First, my iPad arrived, just in time for the trip, despite the fact that it was not due till Saturday (too late to bring it):

And second, I received an e-mail entry for the Warding Contest from French Jess reminding me why I <3 her.

Hi Peat,

Hope you are well! I’ve seen that you are very busy this days! That’s great!

First I wanted to thank you and Dani for the bookplate! I stuck it in my Desert Spear and it’s just so beautiful! It made my boyfriend jealous!

I’m actually devouring the Desert Spear! I had no time to read in my trip to Corsica, always hiking (under the rain…), so I had to delay the beginning of my reading when I came back home! I’m almost at the end of the first part and GOD it’s good to be back in your world!!! I LOVE it so much! I’ll tell you what I think of the entire book as soon as I finish it πŸ™‚

But I write for another reason! As soon as I saw on your website that another contest had began, I told myself “I HAVE to do something for this one as well”!

I love your contests, it’s always a lot of fun to find ideas and DO things, crazy, or not!

So I had a few ideas for this one, but I must wait until a go back at my parent’s where I got all my stuff to achieve these, so I started to seek more ideas that I can create while I’m here in South France! I was reading the first part of the Desert Spear when I finally had one. I love Inevera’s character, and am fascinated by alagai’s magic, so I decided to try to make my version of alagai hora! So I waited the night, slaughtered some demons, took some bones, and carved them with wards (I don’t have prophecy wards, so I took the Misc wards and the mind ward) and Krasian symbols I invented from Arabic alphabet. And then, all I had to do was close the curtains, light a candle, and cast the bones:

Have a good day!

And expect another message in a few day when I finish the Desert Spear!

Jess

Posted on May 27, 2010 at 2:33 pm by PeatB
Filed under Contests, Craft, Fan Art, Fans, France, Warded Art
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