New Excisions

pm_hand_avatar_5smJust a quick note to point out that I’ve added two more deleted scenes to the Excisions page. The scenes, Canon Apocrypha and First Kill, are early work, from the second and first drafts of The Painted/Warded Man, respectively.

If you’re new to my work, these may not be the best introduction, as they are early, unedited work and contain spoilers, but if you’ve already read the book, and are interested both in the writing process and seeing young Arlen in action, have a look. As always, I’ve included an introduction and discussion on why the scenes were cut. If anyone has any questions or comments, you can put them in the comments section of this post.

Posted on March 16, 2009 at 6:07 pm by PeatB
Filed under Craft, Writing
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2 responses to “New Excisions”

  1. I love your deleted scenes! Keep ’em coming! (In between your thousand other obligations, of course.)

    Posted by Jon S, on March 17th, 2009 at 4:12 am
  2. First of all, big thx for book like this(probably you hear this everyday but thx anyway). Second did you thought about what will become after “Warden Man Saga”? There will be more books placing in this world? If so.. I thought prequel – about first demon wars – might be interesting. Also I would know what demons really are.. and from where they came from. I just started reading and I dont know if there are clear demon origins – not just like they appear from something, and we dont know why they hate humans so much. Btw sorry for my English. I’m also curious if maybe you was inspired by anime nammed “Full Metal Alchemist”, cuse I see some smillar things. Well dont get me wrong maybe its hard to be fully orginal in something but every writer needs an inspire right? Greetings from Poland and keep doing your great job – wich is making us happy 🙂

    Posted by Felix, on March 17th, 2009 at 5:25 am