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The Hexa Demon

Posted by Meg

Here is another awesome demon found in the comments on the original Coreling Contest post. Since it was posted after the deadline, it is not eligible for the contest, but that doesn’t make any less awesome.

The Hexa demons are all the same size and shape, they are 1 foot by 1 foot hexagonal tubes that are often found near volcanos. They have taken their shape and size to camouflage themselves with the basalt stone columns that grow near volcanos.

Each Hexa has 6 limbs, all can be used as feet or hands. Each of their hands are six pronged claws capable of grasping objects with enhanced dexterity, running with speed along the ground or up or down cliffs. Their favorite pass time when they are not maiming any living thing is cartwheeling down sheer cliffs. Their eyes are their only weakness; they have two eyes similar to a fish’s, one eye on each side of their body. This creates small blind spots on each of their sides.

Individually, the Hexas are easily fought, however on mass they will easily over power the stoutest fighter. With their six limbs they will launch themselves at you, grabbing you with as many limbs as they can, weighing your body down with their spare limbs, they will tear chunks of flesh from your body. The sight of blood will send them into a rage induced furry making them even more violent and vicious like the sharks of the ocean.

Although they have no mouths it is theorised they take sustenance through their limbs. With no mouths, they can’t make noise as the other demons can, however through slapping their bodies, rubbing their arms together and even making clicking and clapping sounds, they can communicate efficiently. Before they attack, they often make eerie humming noises to scare their intended victims by vibrating their limbs in harmony.

When threatened, they can form defensive or offensive structures by holding the hands of their brothers and sisters, working with one mind to achieve their goal. They can form basic shapes or even bipedal monstrosities, with enough Hexas, working together they can make any shape.

Thank to Bruce for posting! These Hexa’s limbs sound terrifying. I will stay out of arm’s reach for sure.

We have two more entries to post (tomorrow!) and then we will announcing the winners this Thursday June 7th!

Posted on June 4, 2012 at 3:00 pm by megelizabeth
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Hound Demons

Posted by Meg

Found this demon description in the comments section of another Coreling Contest entry: Chameleon Demon or Veiled Demon. Since it was posted well after the contest deadline, it is not eligible for one of the prizes. But we wanted to share it anyway! Posted by William, this demon is made of awesome.

Hound demons:

Hound Demons are about the size of a pony but with a longer and thinner bodies covered in leathery and scaly skin that ranges from black to a browny orange color. The scales cover its neck and chest area, as well as on the outer thighs of the demon and the belly; knees to feet, tail and face, are covered with a leathery skin. The tail is similar to that of a cat, long and lithe, providing balance and agility. Its ears come out from the side of its head, constantly turning and listening for unwary prey, and while the Hound Demon lacks eyes, it makes up for it with a great sense of smell that comes from two slits running from where the eyes would be to where the tip of the snout.

The Hound Demon is the ultimate hunting dog with the ability to hear and smell prey from up to a kilometer or more away. Once they have found the prey they are hunting, they can run with ease to catch a person on foot or at maximum speed to catch a mounted rider and maintain that speed for several kilometers. Even if the person escapes that night they can pick up the scent and follow it the next night and repeat this process until they prey is found. The Hound Demon’s teeth are strong enough to bite through wood and have a grip as strong as a crocodile, not letting go until killed. The last of their known strengths is to have resistance to fire, similar to that of a rock demon.

Despite their many strengths, they have weaknesses with the main being their deterrent to water, such as that of a river of a lake, preventing them from reaching places like Fort Lakton and crossing the Dividing River and the fact that they cannot swim. The Hound Demon’s sense of smell has also been known to work against it with strong smells that can be made by Herb Gatherers serving a limited deterrent. The lack of its eyes means it cannot actually see things, only anticipate which way people are coming from; this means that if it is hit from a distance with an arrow it cannot actually dodge the arrow, that marksman would have to be a kilometer away of course. The only other weakness these demons have is the lack of armor in some areas, however even in these areas only a direct hit from an arrow or spear will do it any damage.

A Hound Demons can live in the mountains, on the plains and in the outer forest but prefers more open space for easier hunting, but if determined, will follow prey into deeper parts of the forest. Due to the fact that they cannot cross running water, where they rise will tend to be where they will hunt to until the next night where they can pick up the scent again. Hound Demons prefer the greener lands over the deserts of Fort Krasia.

The Hound Demons armor is strongest on the front of the body and on the thighs however the skin too is strong and will resist all but direct blows from an arrow or spear. The place with the least amount of armor is the tail so it can give the Hound Demon maximum balance while chasing down prey.

Hound Demons, like Mimics, are usually under the control of a Mind Demon, however they do, like most other demons, roam on their own, hunting for prey. A Hound Demon is used mainly for tracking down targets for Mind Demons and can drag them to the Core if needed. When hunting their prey, they stalk it until close enough to charge in and catch the targeted prey unaware and strangely, when hunting under the control of a Mind Demon they will ignore all other people apart from those they are hunting unless provoked.

Short story:

From the shadows of Core, the Mind Demon watched through the unique vision of the eyeless Hounds as they chased down their prey in the newly fallen night. It had been patient waiting for the wards to fail or for him to leave for supplies. It had slowly pushed through the wards with its mind and instilled fear, and now watched him run and waited.

Eran ran as fast as he could, body running on mostly adrenaline. The village of Cutter’s Hollow could only be a few more kilometers away. The wards around his farm had failed, and he needed to get the book somewhere safe. As he ran, the adrenaline he felt slowly began to fade and he began to tire, running slower and slower until he was reduced to as fast a walk as he could manage.

A bone chilling howl rose up on the wind and Eran’s head snapped back, they were closing in on him. He pushed himself into as fast a run as he could manage. In his mind, he begged the Creator to let him reach safety in time and as the thought crossed his mind, he spied lights in the distance and his hope soared.

The Creator was with him as he ran within mere twenty meters of safety before one of the Hound Demons leaped at him from the darkness, knocking him over. Two more appeared behind him. An ambush, and he had been so close. They stalked around him before attacking again, tearing at his stomach and legs. He felt the flesh of his body being torn apart but suddenly the tearing stopped and a calming music filled the air, through one eye he saw the demons looking interested in something else but not a dark interest, more curious. The music went from a calm melody to a sudden a deathly haunting tune and the demons backed away. Eran’s mind was fading too much to care by know but he felt someone rap a cloth around him and a voice said, “Take him to the hospit and have one of my apprentices treat his wounds.” There was no reply, but he was lifted up by strong arms and taken into the warded village.

Fury ran through the Mind Demon in the darkness of the Core his mental cry caused even a Rock Demon to roar in pain. At his order, the Hound Demons dematerialized and sank back down into the Core but one remained until sunrise to watch and wait, sitting on the very edge of the wards, there would be other nights with more successful hunts.

Thank you to William for posting about the Hound Demon. I love the connection created between them and the Mind Demons. Great job!

Posted on June 4, 2012 at 8:00 am by megelizabeth
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Water Demon

Posted by Meg

Here we have an entry from Carol, who has done some truly awesome stuff in the past. Carol was a first place winner for her Renna and sexy Inevera Cosplay and a winner in our most recent Fan Art Contest. Check out her most recent endeavor!

Hi,

I’d like to enter this water demon in your latest competition. It has a “shark-like” fin on its back and sharp points on its tail to help scupper boats. The tentacles and claws at the front drag down anything floating above and feed them into the wide mouth filled with lots of pointy teeth. It can be found in the water at Lakton and any vessel sailing at night must have these wards painted under the boat or they will be quickly pulled down, sunk and eaten!!! These wards represent the sun and fire but lightening and flame wards can also be used against them.

From, Carol

Thank you to Carol for your fantastic water demon! I love the wards you detailed on the side. I also love that it is combination of various scary underwater creatures. Well done!

Don’t forget to check back to the blog on Thursday, June 7th when we are announcing the winners!

Posted on June 3, 2012 at 3:00 pm by megelizabeth
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The Hoarder

Posted by Meg

A story from Charlie.

Hey Peat,

I’m Charlie. Absolutely love your books, and cannot waiittt for The Daylight War. Keep up the good work. Anyway, hope this gets in on time. If not, I had fun writing it anyway. This is the Sound Demon, AKA The Howler. I’ve also drawn up a ward for this (though I’m a terrible artist, hence the fanfic rather than art) that I’ll send in when I get the time.

The Hoarder

“Thank The Creator,” the Mountain Guide sighed in relief.

He and the Warder, whom he was escorting, had finally reached the summit. Through torrential rain and gale-force winds, they had climbed on, much to the reluctance of the Guide. Many a time, he had strongly advised turning back. But the Warder’s mind was set; he was intent on seeing the cave for himself, or rather, seeing if there was in fact a cave to see.

It was very possible it was merely a tool in a Jongleur’s tale. Though when the Warder heard talk of riches to be found, his curiosity was spiked.

“Well, you’ve proven yourself worth the price you ask.” The Warder noted loudly.

“And you’ve proven yourself as crazy as the people say.” The Guide shouted over the pounding of rain against rock.

The Warder grinned. “I prefer ambitious.”

They spotted the cave easily, an enormous mouth opened up into an eerie dark. The guide thought it reminiscent of a giant snake, jaw wide to engulf its prey.

Were they the prey this time? Only The Creator could know what skulked inside. But his knowledge of mountains checked him. There wasn’t much that could survive in the conditions present for long.

Only the worst creatures of all. He thought with a shiver.

They darted for it nonetheless, but not before something carved into the rocky exterior caught the Guide’s eye. He did not draw attention to it, having heard stories of the man he was traveling with from folk in the village.

The shelter was a welcome comfort given their three days in thin tents, barely capable of keeping the warmth their bodies produced inside the cloth.

“Would you look at that?” The Guide gasped, pointing at the ground.

There was no dirt there, but a great stone floor, clearly manmade, stretching further than the light extended in. The cave was huge.

“It’s called crete. Used in Miln that is, the city I come from.” The warder said. “Not cheap stuff mind; some rich lord must have used this cave once. Creator knows what for”

“What d’you suppose happened to them?” The guide wondered.

“That much is obvious.” The Warder replied, tapping his foot at deep grooves in the stone. “Demon claws.”

Fear struck the guide’s face. “You be sure to check your wards thrice over before nightfall Warder.”

“Will do. Didn’t spend three days climbing this damned mountain only to get cored,” he said

*

The two quickly made a fire and sat for a time, basking in the warmth it exuded. They never spoke. It was rare they did besides a few words here and there, for the two never really knew each other. Their meet was purely business, and the warder was private. Or just very mysterious.

“You know, you never did tell me your name,” the guide said, breaking the quiet that plagued the duo.

“Nor will I,” the Warder stated bluntly. “My name is of no matter to you.”

“So long as I get paid. Not often I get business from someone as shadowy as you”

The warder scowled. “You’ll get your money.”

The guide looked at him a moment, thinking his next words over carefully.

“The Jongleurs that pass through here-”

“What about them?” The Warder cut in.

“They say you’re no Warder, that you’re a ward hoarder. Hoarder’s the name they’ve planted on you in their songs.” He was afraid his curiosity might offend the man, but it got the better of him anyway.

The man shrugged, not even raising his gaze from the embers. “I can ward as good as any other. No demon has yet broken through my defences. That makes me a Warder. To the Core with your Jongleurs.”

“It’s said you scour the lands for wards, but refuse to share them.”

The warder looked up finally, eyes burning into his guide’s.

“Do you have any idea how much gold a lost ward can fetch?” He asked, annoyance easily distinguishable in his tone. “If I am lucky enough to come across one, I will sell it to the highest bidder. If they choose not to share that ward, it makes no matter to me.”

“Just how much gold are we talking?”

“More than you’ll see in your life. Every warder in Miln kept their wards close to the chest ‘til a few years ago. Then some guy called Cob started trading them, and now most everyone is jumping on the bandwagon.”

“Maybe that’s what’s best for everyone.” The guide said.

“Not me.” The warder replied.

The silence returned then, and the Guide had no intention of being part of it.

“I’m gonna stretch my legs a bit,” the Guide announced, though his intentions were more than that.

He stepped back out into the pouring rain and quickly made his way to what had caught his attention earlier. There, engraved into the cave’s mouth, were wards. Most he recognized – rock, wood, snow – but then he spotted a fourth. He was no Warder, but he could tell immediately it was different. This was for no common demon encountered in the village. This was in a league all of its own.

He picked up a small pebble and, using the knife hanging on his belt, etched its design onto it. He would not allow this hoarder to hide another potentially life-saving ward from mankind, just for a quick profit.

The Hoarder came out with his warding equipment just as The Guide slipped the pebble into his trouser pocket, and pretended to be admiring the view from the mountain top.

They didn’t speak, but The Guide watched as the Hoarder went about his business, taking pleasure in the fact that he had noticed the ward first, because as expected, the Hoarder made note of it in a pad he drew from his satchel, and then quickly, looking back to be sure his escort wasn’t watching, chiselled it from the mouth, preventing any other from copying it.

“What you got there?” the Guide asked of the notepad, cursing his stupidity as he did.

The Hoarder whirled on The Guide with blinding speed.

“Why so interested!?” He demanded.

The Guide stuttered. “No, no reason. Just wondered is all.”

“Did you see the ward engraved over there?” He asked, his stance letting The Guide know he was in trouble.

“You found wards?” The guide tried to sound surprised, but failed, his sudden fear overtaking his thoughts.

Without another word, the spear hung across the Hoarder’s back found its way into his hands. And faster than the Guide could have possibly moved, he was struck hard with its butt.

Blackness.

“I’m sorry Mountain Guide, but gold trumps honor,” the Hoarder muttered to the unconscious body, muddied and drenched in the dirt.

He went back to warding the cave mouth. A lot of the work had been done for him; he just needed to touch up and repair sections here and there. Lucky really, since the sun had already begun to set.

*

He retreated to the fire and the protection of the cave as the last hints of light drifted from the darkened sky.

He felt no remorse as he watched his escort lay motionless in the dark, instead turning his attention to the new ward drawn delicately in his notepad. He figured the demon this ward defended against hadn’t risen from the Core since the Return.

May never return.

But that wouldn’t stop the collectors fighting over it, using their gold as weaponry. The thought thrilled him. He’d be rich.

He tucked it safely away in his warding satchel, and looked back out to his Guide. It was then he realised the demons hadn’t risen. But that wasn’t too unusual at a height such as he was at. They chose to materialise further down, where they had more chance of feasting on human flesh, rather than each other’s. But they’d catch the Guide’s scent soon enough. And they’d take care of him, save him the job.

He lay back and closed his eyes, looking forward to the first decent night’s sleep in a few days. It was then the pain came.

Such pain he was sure a dozen demons were clawing at his head. But there were none on him. With tremendous effort, he rolled his body onto his side to face the cave mouth, to look his killers in the eyes and know which variety broke through his wardnet. Yet he saw nothing.

There wasn’t even a demon outside the cave. And it’s impossible for a demon to materialise through crete …That’s when it hit him. The terrifying but now obvious truth.

Whatever breed of demon the new ward was meant for, it wasn’t to keep the demon out of the cave, it was to lock it inside. The cave, given a stone floor by humans. They’d created a prison, for a breed so deadly they’d rather not face it in combat.

He’d seen wards such as these before. One way wards. The Krasians used them to trap sand demons in pits to await the sun.

But that would mean this demon has been trapped here since the last demon war. The Hoarder realised, terrified. I bet it’s angry, and hungry.

There was nothing he could do. He raised his hands to his head and found to his horror his ears had erupted with blood. It was sound. His ears still rung with the bellow of the demon, fast approaching from somewhere deep in the cave, its walls carrying the noise and multiplying its intensity.

How powerful it must be to afflict so much pain from a distance.

He attempted to muster all his will into a crawl, but he could not even do that. The pain too much, the sound overwhelming. Not that he had anywhere to crawl too. His only defence was that which he erased from the cave.

He cried out, tears streaming down his cheeks. It was pain, fear, regret; all rolled into a single emotion and released through his own roar.

And then it was upon him.

*

The guide’s eyes blinked open six or seven times before he sat bolt upright, realizing suddenly he was out in the naked night unprotected. He darted for the cave, deciding he’d deal with the Hoarder when he was inside and safe from corelings.

But as he drew closer, he was repelled from the cave. A noise so powerful it felt like it was cutting through his skull. He could see just inside the cave mouth, a beast of some kind leapt upon the Hoarder and dug its three-clawed hands into his back, pulling him backwards into the firelight.

The guide could see it now, in all its ferocity.

It was humanoid, though from its stance and fighting style, looked as if it would be more comfortable using all fours to move. It was slim, but packed with muscle, appearing to be close to bursting from its frame. It looked like a thin man had recently packed on a tonne of disproportionate muscle.

At first glance, the Guide thought the demon to be sweating by the fire, but soon noticed that it was in fact its natural appearance, its skin covered in a thick slime. It would fling off with every turn the demon made, creating a slimy battleground.

With another tug, the demon dragged the Hoarder further back into the cave to finish him. The Guide wasn’t about to let his chance slip away, and so he ran full speed to the warded mouth. He knew running back down the mountain would only get him so far before the demon caught up. He needed to lock this prisoner back in its cell. While it was occupied.

The noise was still painful to his ears, but he pressed on. He knew his actions in the next minute would decide whether he lived or died. He pulled the pebble from his pocket and began the process of implementing it back into the already established wardnet.

He had but a line to perfect when the roar increased in volume. He turned and saw the demon inches away from its victim’s face, let out a howl so powerful, the Hoarder’s head burst in an explosion of blood. His ears were first, then his nose, eyes, and mouth, all leaking blood like a coreling’s fountain.

When its victim was down, the demon looked up. It locked stares with the Guide, and it was the first time the Guide truly saw it. As he stared into its face he saw no eyes. There was nothing. Just a set of ears, pushed far back into its skull, and a mouth, the predominant feature – nearly taking up its entire face space, with four fangs and two giant piercing teeth in-between them.

It was unlike anything he’d ever seen. It was the definition of evil. It had to stay chained.

He turned back to the ward but the demon let out another howl and charged. As expected, it ran on all fours, pouncing like a dog.

Just like the Hoarder’s, his eardrums burst. Blood erupted from them like lava would a volcano. He clutched at them, but it did nothing to stop the flow.

He would not let this thing loose!

With a last display of willpower, he finished the final line of the ward. And fell to the floor.

The demon leapt at him, smelling its escape after so, so long, but as every other night, the magic of that ward repelled the demon. Its face smashed against the invisible barrier and it was flung back fifteen feet, landing in the flames. They did not affect it of course, but the demon had lost nonetheless.

It would never escape this place. It lost its chance.

The Guide pushed himself to his feet and grinned at the demon in the cave.

“I’ll call you a Sound Demon, or Howler, yeah, Howler’s nice.”

The demon’s huge jaw opened to let out a scream, but nothing got through. The ward stopped its sound-based abilities from getting through too.

“I’m going to find a ward to kill you. And then I’ll be back,” the Guide said, wiping the blood from his ears. “That’s a promise.”

Thanks to Charlie for sending in that gripping story! I love the character of the Hoarder and the trapped Sound Demon. Great job!

Posted on June 3, 2012 at 8:00 am by megelizabeth
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Doppelgangers

Posted by Meg

Here is the last entry from Mia …

Still me. My last demon with a backstory (sort of) is the split demon. At various points, I’ve also called it The Twins, the Gemini demon, the doppelgangers, shadow demon. When targeting its prey, it splits into two seemingly identical demons. Warding the doppelganger is like warding a shadow. Only the real one can be affected by wards and kills both. I don’t know why, but I had the Monty Python song ‘Brave Sir Robin’ in my head when the idea for this demon came to me so I wrote the backstory to that tune.


There goes the vile split demon

Rose forth from down the Core

Watch him fly from here to there

It moves quite fast, take care!

He seems not at all afraid to be

Killed by nasty wards

Big, bad, bold, barbed split demon.

He would quickly split in two

When faced with any foe

One is real, the other fake

Hard to tell, oh no!

You’d better learn real quick

Or the coreling gets away

Just make sure you ward the true one

Not the copy!

It’s a ball before split

Black and green all around

Set of wings for each half

When it splits best watch out

They have lots of sharp teeth

And with poison to boot

Watch your front and your back

Do you need to hear more??

Decide if you will run away

Or if you will fight and stay!

The first moves left, the second moves right

You’re surrounded, no escape in sight

Don’t let it near enough to bite

There’s poison in those fangs, that’s right

Their speed, their bite – they’re both bad news

Neither one is good to choose

Toxic, vile and lethal – split demon!

And that’s all folks! Thanks for your indulgence!

p.s. I know it’s past deadline. I’m not really joining the contest so much as demonstrating that I have corelings on the brain. I blame you, Mr. Brett.

Thank you Mia! Fantastic entry. You can check out her other two posts here.

Posted on June 2, 2012 at 3:00 pm by megelizabeth
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