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Greedy Corelings

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Next up we have three new entries!

Here I offer my first of three entries. A little cliché? Perhaps yet, at the same time, I feel it needs to be done. I have zero visual artistic talent so here’s a little write-up coming at you.

There was a rumbling sound of sand being tossed about violently, though it was only a distant thing at first. Unfortunately, the pain was not. Kalidan had never been in such agony before as pain thrummed through his body to the steady beat of his heart. Again and again, he struggled to rise – to return to the fight and help his fellow sharum – but his body resisted his every command.  Grinding his teeth together, Kalidan tried again with all he was worth. This action reminded him that his mouth was lined with sand and blood that would have brought severe discomfort if it was not something he was used to. Being trained as one of the sharum meant blood and pain on the desert floor daily, and he had learned to accept it as one accepts the burning rays from the sun above. On this night, however, he was victim to more pain than perhaps he could handle. The only thing keeping him from simply giving in at that point was the refusal to die on his belly. Everam watch me! Shar’Dama’Ka watch me! I will die with honour for the glory of the –

“Eeeeaaahhhh!”

A blood-curdling screech interrupted Kalidan’s thoughts and provided the last bit of motivation he needed to reach deep, deep down and find the strength he needed to move again. It was still an achingly slow process that sent fresh jolts of pain lancing through his being, but move Kalidan did. In what felt like forever, he had lifted his head enough to take in his surroundings for the first time since the ambush had begun. Kalidan squinted through one blurry eye as the other refused to open and found his inner rage growing with each mangled and mutilated body his eye fell upon. All from his tribe. All honourable sharum he had fought beside for years in the maze. All slaughtered by a single alagai. How could this have happened? The Shar’Dama’Ka had provided wards for defending against alagai attacks and battle wards for delivering swift death upon them. How could one alagai have brought such ruin to a dozen battle-hardened sharum? Kalidan was past asking such questions if ever he had – his memory was blurred at the moment from loss of blood. What he did know was his hunting party had been beset by an alagai unlike any other they had faced before or heard of. A creature that moved beneath the sand like a fish through water and always struck where least expected with frightening speed and incredible power.

Straining every muscle that would still answer the call, Kalidan got a knee under him and used his spear to help rise further. He could barely move his left leg, and his left arm wouldn’t respond at all. When the alagai had first struck, it had been targeting the man walking beside him, Guthembir, who had been unlucky enough not to die right away. Kalidan had received a grazing blow from the attack but even that had been enough to incapacitate him. Until now. Shaking with every jerking motion, Kalidan rose to his feet leaning heavily on his right leg. His breathing came in ragged gasps that burned his throat, but he pushed the discomfort far from his mind while attempting to turn around. Sliding his foot through the sand he soon turned his body slightly and could crane his neck just enough that he found the survivors from his party. Two men, standing back-to-back, scanned the ground around them searching for their attacker. Kalidan couldn’t see their expressions while they wore their veils, but he confidently guessed they would have spoken of two warriors ready to die.

A moment later the ground erupted beside them and from it sprung the alagai striking before either could move to meet the challenge. One second the two sharum stood vigilant and the next one had lost everything above his waist and the other was missing his right arm and, as he spun with the force of impact, his back had several enormous gashes revealing bone underneath. His screams ended as quickly as they began with blood spilling out from his mouth. Kalidan focused on the creature for the brief time he could. It was most closely resembled to a very large worm but with scales like a reptile though ones capable of breaking bone and tearing through flesh. The steel-like scales themselves were single overlapping rows spaced evenly apart and, when the alagai twisted, parted to show much softer – relatively speaking – muscle beneath. The alagai slid back under the sand with ease as its body continued to flow from its point of attack, spanning some ten meters in length once the end finally appeared.

Sand sprayed against Kalidan and threatened to blind his one functioning eye as he lost his balance and fell to his knee. Through the settling sand, Kalidan could see the alagai moving through the ground close to the surface. It was aware there was only one left to kill; one who was barely able to move and therefore not likely to prove an actual threat. Wait for me brothers; I’ll join you in just a few moments.

“Come on then – show me the fire in your eyes!” The alagai answered Kalidan’s final roar as it turned straight for him with all speed and shot to the surface. A wide, circular, maw opened up releasing a horrid stench and showing row after row of razor-sharp teeth descending down the alagai’s throat. The further down, the smaller the teeth became, which was likely to deal with the ever shrinking chunks of food. The first row seemed to reach out to him, ready to dig deep into his flesh. Kalidan bared his teeth in a fierce grin as he hefted his spear for one last lunge and pushed off from where he knelt. He was about to die but he was fine with it for he had left many sons to carry on the honour of his family. More than that though, he knew the Shar’Dama’Ka would lead all the Krasians to victory against the alagai no matter what spewed forth from the Core.

Name: Tunneling Coreling

Height: 1-1.5 meters

Length: 8-12 meters

Physical appearance: A large worm with scales as hard as a rock coreling’s carapace. Its entire body is not covered with the scales, but the scales are just long enough as to cover all skin despite each row being spaced at least a hands-length apart. Above ground these scales protect the coreling’s muscle but also act as offensive weapons as the edges are sharp, though not as much as a well-kept sword, enough to cut through the human body with the momentum of the coreling’s movements. Below ground, these scales are actually part-way extended and the coreling twists its body, being able to twist different parts of its body in different directions, to push the ground away and make moving through the ground easy. As mentioned in the short above, inside its mouth are rows of teeth that are spaced apart but by only half a hands-length and do become smaller the further in. The front row is capable of extending out to pierce the intended target and pull in. It actually has four eyes, two on top (a term used loosely) and two on the bottom (also loosely), which are surrounded by armour-like skin.

Strengths: Stealth, fast movements, sharp and extendable scales, extended front row teeth for lunging attacks like a spear, very dense scales, can only be attack when above ground unless some other means of otherwise is discovered.

Weaknesses: Can’t make sharp turns above or below ground, scales don’t always cover all of the body, vision is very limited as eyes that are below the skin don’t do well on bright nights, never travel in more than pairs.

Habitat: A tunneling coreling can’t move through anything, especially rocks. They live in deserts and muddy areas like riverbanks or where it has been rainy recently. Some of the much stronger ones can travel through soft earth but the harder the ground, the slower they become.

Ward: The ward for a tunneling coreling is that of a wind coreling’s that has been inverted with traits of a rock coreling’s.

Entry Two: Attack of the Entries.

Silence hung heavy in the forest as the Warded Man rode upon Twilight Dancer’s back. He and his steed, which was also his closest friend, were among the few who braved the night – in fact they had no fear for it at all – but they were also members of the even fewer who fought back at night. No matter what corelings they came upon and no matter how strong their numbers, the Warded Man and Twilight Dancer stood defiant and strong. On this night, however, they had yet to encounter a single coreling, and that had both wary of their surroundings. Even from a distance, the Warded Man had not seen any wood corelings, which he would have expected in abundance here but instead there were only trees – and no sound. The silence was so strong as though nothing lived. It had the Warded Man not exactly nervous but tensed for the slightest hint of movement. He could feel how Twilight Dancer felt very much the same, but Twilight Dancer was no ordinary horse. From birth he had been trained to be fierce against corelings and obedient to the Warded Man’s every command. Over the years they had formed a bond that transcended words.

Ears twitching, the Warded Man turned his head at the same moment Twilight Dancer did to a distant sound like that of branches snapping. Then again, only closer. Something was coming towards them and that meant they were not likely to last the rest of the night without ridding the world of at least one coreling. Patting Twilight Dancer on the neck, the Warded Man dismounted and flexed his arms and rolled his shoulders. As he did skin became visible revealing tattoos. He had tattoos all over his body. They allowed him to face corelings as he wanted, with his bare hands. If there were many he would remove his cloak to allow all the wards covering his body to work but if there were only a few then he doubted it would be necessary. Still the sounds drew closer, but he could not yet make out what he faced through the trees. Only that it was clear his aggressor was large. Twilight Dancer stood patiently off to the side, ready to join the fight if the Warded Man required help or if there were enough to go around.

Neither had to wait much longer before they could make out the sight of trees being knocked over and tossed aside, seemingly with ease. Something large was beginning to loom into view. A rock coreling? No, it wasn’t quite tall enough and was much more round. What was it? The Warded Man had spent the majority of his life traveling and he had gone far, coming across many corelings until he had thought he knew them all. Right now, however, he couldn’t guess at what he was about to kill. Not yet anyway. It was then that the coreling got so close it swiped at a tree and sent it flying at the Warded Man. Calmly he ducked under the immediate threat but almost before he could recover the coreling was close enough to strike with a huge fist. The ground shattered where the Warded Man had been an instant before, but the coreling had followed his movements and attempted to hit him with a backhand. In response, the Warded Man leapt away and grabbed onto a tree branch before swinging up to crouch atop it. The coreling paused for a moment and the Warded Man took the opportunity to study what he faced and indeed it was no coreling he had faced before. In fact, it didn’t really look like a coreling but more a pile of rocking rocks. It looked more like a rock coreling than a rock coreling. Glowing red eyes stared at him from within dark pits of stone. A wide mouth opened to let out a harsh moan as it took a step towards the tree the Warded Man was on. Its every movement sounded of rocks being ground together. Short stubby legs held the coreling up, so short were they that the Warded Man wondered how it had moved so fast. His eyes drifted to where the coreling had made its entrance and saw trails in the ground as though something heavy had been dragged along. Had the coreling been sliding through the dirt?

Seeing that his opponent was drawing within arm’s reach of the tree, the Warded Man decided it was time to test the coreling’s ability to take a hit. Removing his sandals and diving from the branch feet first, the Warded Man drove his heels into the chest of the coreling; the impact jolting through his legs but nothing else. Bits of rock fell away but there was no light. Confusion fluttered through his mind then as to why the wards on his feet hadn’t activated. Perhaps they were covered with something. Only a second passed before the Warded Man changed his attack and bent in close to slam his fist between the coreling’s eyes. Pain shot up his arm causing him to wince as again his only reward was that of rocks breaking away from the whole. Before the Warded Man could recover from his shock at this fact, he was tugged roughly by his right leg as the coreling slammed him down to the ground. Head bouncing off the hard dirt road, the Warded Man barely had time to react to the fist plummeting towards him. Feeling his legs scape along the massive hand, the Warded Man flipped back onto his hands and then again onto his feet to face his enemy. Again that mouth opened to let out a disturbing moan but the coreling did not move right away. Something unexpected happened then; dirt and rocks began crawling up the coreling’s legs and arm. The Warded Man watched through narrowed eyes as what little damage he had been able to cause was repaired. Once the final rock fell into place, the coreling shot forward taking the Warded Man by surprise as the coreling slid across the ground. He attempted to leap away but the coreling’s long reach proved too much, and the Warded Man found himself in a crushing embrace.

Pain exploded throughout his body as the coreling began to squeeze, straining every bone and squishing every muscle. Was this how he was going to die? Did his journey really end here? Was the Warded Man about to join Arlen Bales? Suddenly there was sweet relief as the coreling released him, and he fell to the ground coughing. Straining to see through blurred vision, the Warded Man could just make out Twilight Dancer pulling its horns free of the coreling’s round body. For a moment it struggled to stay on its feet but then collapsed. Rocks falling away until it were in fact nothing more than a pile of rubble. Slowly rising to his feet, the Warded Man walked over to what remained of the coreling with Twilight Dancer at his side. Determined to know what happened, he began tossing aside rocks and dirt for something – anything – that would give an answer. It didn’t take long before he found what he wanted. At the center of it all was a thin creature, though as tall as a man it was about a third in width. Its skin looked like wrinkled deathly grey parchment. The cause of death was easily located as it appeared one of Twilight Dancer’s horns had stabbed through the abdomen; nearly cutting the coreling in half in the process. Understanding dawned on the Warded Man then. He had discovered a coreling that used the very earth as armour. A rumbling brought the pair’s attention away from the carcass and down the road where they could quite clearly see another such coreling approaching quickly.

“I see,” breathed the Warded Man as he reached into a pack Twilight Dancer carried, “so that’s how it is then.”

As the coreling came within ten feet, blood-red eyes meeting that of its prey, it reached out with large grasping hands and let out a foul triumphant moan. It was then that the Warded Man drew forth a warded battle-hammer and spear and met the charge head-on, feeling the confident weight of both weapons and, as always, the presence of his best friend and protector.

Name: (tentatively named) Earth Coreling

Height: 5’10 – 6’2 without armour, 7-9 feet with armour

Physical appearance: Without armour the coreling appears almost harmless being very thin and without any natural protective armour or claws. Without the ground, its only means of defence are its tiny razor-sharp teeth. Its skin is a dark grey like stone and appears much wrinkled like paper after years of use. There are two large red eyes for it to see with and three slits above the mouth that act as a nose. With armour the coreling appearance is best described as a walking mound of tightly packed rock and dirt. Appearing more round and lightly jagged than covered with muscle. Of formidable height and sporting long arms with large hands on the ends, an earth demon is an intimidating sight even with short stubby legs. The first thing one sees of the coreling is usually its blood red eyes and the last thing they hear is one of its unnerving moans.

Strengths: Can form a thick coat of rock and dirt around its body to protect against attacks; including warded ones. This also offers considerable offensive ability as well. If there is any damage to the armour the coreling can easily repair it so long as it is touching the ground. Is capable of sliding along the ground with ease. Works well with other earth corelings. An earth coreling can literally smell emotion thanks to its third nostril and often hunts by that means.

Weaknesses: When it first rises from the core, it is virtually defenceless. It takes time for the coreling to form its armour – the thicker the armor, the longer it takes. While the armour is forming, or damages are being repaired, the coreling is immobile. Has difficulty with senses while encased in armour. True body is fragile even by human standards. Unable to cross wide spans of water. Earth corelings have a sort of rivalry with rock corelings and will often go out of their way to challenge one, especially if the life of a human is involved, though rarely is this a good idea.

Habitat: Earth corelings are most often found in the mountains, caves or quarries where they can find the strongest material for their armor; more than one landslide has been attributed to them. Sometimes they will explore into other areas but never the desert, unless chasing prey, or near large bodies of water.

Ward: The ward for repelling an earth demon is a semi-circle with three triangles, one behind the other, inside and a jagged line cutting through diagonally.

Entry Three: Lord of the Entries Return of the Entry

Ildila awoke to being shaken violently by someone. Her heart pounded in her chest from her mind being ripped out of the dream she had been in. Uncertain and afraid she lashed out, swinging her arms in defence, but was quickly restrained by strong, familiar hands. Finally her eyes adjusted to the dark enough that she could recognize Hernon, her husband. She was about to throw a few choice words at him for waking her, and so rudely too, when he placed a finger to his lips telling her to remain quite. It was then that she saw the urgency and … fear in his eyes. Her mind started to race then as she considered what the problem could be and the scenario that was foremost in her thoughts was that the wards had failed. She listened to the sounds outside, of the corelings shrieking, but couldn’t make out anything that would indicate that the corelings had breached the magical defences. Hernon was pulling her out of their bed when she leaned in close to whisper in his ear.

“What’s happening? Have the wards failed?”

“Yes,” he replied and her breath caught, “I mean no – I don’t know! All I can tell you is something big trampled through the fields and is in the barn right now and, well, I’m surprised the screams didn’t wake you.” The blood drained from Ildila’s face as she thought of all the animals they had left in the barn. Tears were beginning to slide down her cheeks when she broke from her husband’s grasp and headed for the door.

“Go to Lila’s room and bring her to the kitchen.” Ildila had already been planning on doing exactly what Hernon had just said. There was no chance in the Core that she was going to let some monster get her baby girl. She moved swiftly down the hallway and took a left to enter Lila’s room where she gently lifted the slumbering child into her arms. When she turned around Hernon was waiting at the door anxiously with a hatchet in his hands. Against a coreling, the weapon might as well have been a wooden spoon, but it probably made the man feel just a bit safer.

Hernon ushered his wife through the house until they reached the kitchen where he bent down to uncover the cellar door. They would hide until the morning. Ildila watched as her husband braced himself to lift the wooden panel. It wasn’t that the door was heavy, but it often became stuck and hard to move, Hernon always said he’d find a day to fix it. Just then both adults turned around at the sound of a gurgling roar. Something they had never heard from a coreling before. The baby began to wail in Ildila’s arms as the two looked towards where the sound had come from, frozen with fear. Another loud noise reached them, this time it sounded like wood being snapped, like a wall being smashed to pieces, and that was enough to break Hernon out of his stupor. With a surge of strength and a howl of defiance he throw the cellar door open and stepped to the side, motioning for Ildila to go first. A second crash came from behind causing Ildila to pause for a moment to instinctively turn towards the sound before rushing to the stairs and climbing down.

She reached the bottom and turned to watch her husband begin his descent as a third and very close crash erupted and bits of wood flew over Hernon’s head. They both knew what that meant even though Hernon hadn’t seen the wood and there was terror in his eyes. Ildila reached up with her hand to help her husband down as he began pulling the cellar door shut behind him. Suddenly, a bulky yellowish-green arm with four talons shot into view and grabbed Hernon. The hand squeezed, and the talons ripped through cloth to reach flesh. Ildila listened to the scream that came from her husband’s throat at the pain and, likely, from knowing what was about to happen next. Feeling the fear herself, Ildila began to climb the stairs to aid her husband, the man she loved and had begged her father to marry. She reached out to grab his hand and expected him to do the same but he didn’t. He motioned with one hand for her to back away, to get to safety, and swung the hatchet he still had at the fingers of the coreling while tears flowed from his eyes and blood dripped down his legs. A face came into view behind Hernon and a large mouth opened as he was drawn closer but Ildila had eyes only for her husband and watched him being torn away from her.

“I love you!” He cried just before that large maw clamped shut taking his head, neck, and collar bone with one bite. Blood sprayed out, splattering onto Ildila’s face but she did not so much as flinch as she looked at what remained of her beloved as the coreling’s head pulled away. He was dead, gone; she would never again feel his arms around her when she was sad or feel his lips against hers in joy. She almost reached out again to pull him in, as though that would be enough to bring him back, but then the coreling’s head appeared again for a second bite and seeing that massive mouth open to reveal large jagged teeth with flesh from varying species stuck between them was enough to wake Ildila from her grief for the moment. Grabbing the rope to pull the cellar door closed, she yanked it with all she was worth and it flew shut separating her and her child from the nightmare on the other side. Lila was still screaming in Ildila’s arms and, as the mother looked to the daughter, had not escaped the flurry of blood. Fresh tears welling up in her eyes, Ildila began wiping the blood from her baby as she walked over to the back of the cellar. She reached the wall and turned around to slide down it when an arm burst through the cellar door.

Ildila screamed at the sight as the arm lashed about grabbing at air, trying to find her no doubt. There was still a fair distance between her and the arm’s reach however and so she remained safe with her baby girl. After a few moments the arm slowly, almost grudgingly, retreated. Immediately after, the floorboards above creaked ominously as the coreling moved throughout the kitchen tossing furniture aside and rummaging through cupboards. Sounds of destruction and the sick smacking of lips reached Ildila where she cradled her child. They remained there in silence, Lila having cried herself out, letting the sounds above wash over them. All they had to do was wait till morning and then, then they could figure out what to do next. Ildila had just about nodded off to sleep when she realized something. The noise above had stopped. Perhaps the coreling had moved on?

“I think we’re safe now, Lila.” Something heard Ildila’s whispered words because it rushed across the floor above and stopped directly over the woman whose heart threatened to burst from her chest. She looked at the spot above her head waiting for whatever would come next. There was then more movement above but this time it was dissipating as the coreling moved away from her until it seemed to disappear. The moment was just that, however, the quiet before the storm.

Wood exploded down to bounce upon the cellar floor and through the hole came the coreling dropping to the ground with a great thud that sent dirt flying into the air and causing the house above to shake. Ildila screamed at the sight as she found herself staring into the eyes of a monstrosity. A coreling like none she had ever seen or heard of before. It must have towered eight or nine feet and almost as wide. The creature could only have been described as fat and horrifying. Any muscle it had, and it had displayed evidence of such, was buried deep beneath thick layers of fat. Its oily yellow-green skin was revolting and it exuded a reek that couldn’t be described. Large bulbous red eyes held Ildila’s gaze as a wide smile that revealed long pointed teeth crept across the coreling’s lips. It took a step towards her, and then another as a long arm reached towards her with curved talons.

Ildila turned away from the sight to face the wall and took Lila in her hands. Bending in close she kissed her beautiful, wailing, baby girl on her forehead and gave the best smile she could. Behind her the coreling took another step and she could feel its longing grasp close to her back. Inwardly asking how the Creator could have led her to this point in time, Ildila placed on hand on her child’s head and gave a quick twist. The wailing stopped. No coreling will have you Lila, thought a broken woman just before she felt greedy claws rip into her flesh.

Name: Glutton Coreling

Height: Original height set at 5 feet but potential height could be without limit.

Physical appearance: A glutton coreling begins life as a thin creature with yellow-green skin knowing only hunger. It has long arms with four curved talons on each hand and has a wide mouth with powerful, long sharp teeth. Glutton corelings eat, that is what they do, and all the time, as their hunger is never satisfied. The more they eat the larger they grow. When they return from the core the next night they appear empty, as though all they had eaten had been drained from them, it’s unknown what happens to what they eat other than that it is quickly processed into a pasty substance within their bodies, and what is left is a creature with large folds of skin, like someone wearing clothes much too large for them and their hunger has only increased. By all accounts a glutton coreling’s skin has no limits and will continue to stretch to accommodate all the coreling takes in.

Strengths: Is physically very strong and gets stronger the more it consumes. When its skin is pierced, a paste-like substance, which is what it eats turns into, spills out to disorient attackers before clogging up the wound. A glutton coreling can eat anything organic and, depending on strength levels, just about anything non-organic. Skin is hard to puncture. Has long arms with sharp hook talons on the end for catching prey. Teeth are nearly unbreakable. When a glutton coreling has set its sights on something or someone its determination to consume makes it a terrifying and near-unstoppable force. A glutton coreling will also exhibit surprising intelligence when food is the goal.

Weaknesses: Has no armor and therefore can be hurt by weapons without battle wards. However, there needs to be significant strength behind the blow. Is very single-minded, particularly after first materializing from the core, wishing only to eat and will even ignore danger or potential danger to reach or finish a meal. Isn’t very fast or stealthy making it much the opposite of a bank coreling, which glutton corelings actively attempt to eat. Doesn’t work well with other corelings, including other glutton corelings.

Habitat: Glutton corelings have no single home. They travel where they will and that is always where they can find organic matter to consume.

Ward: The ward for a glutton coreling appears as two capital e’s facing eachother only with the bottom line of the left angled up forty-five degrees, and the bottom line of the right angled down forty-five degrees. It is wise to make the ward as large as possible as its effect on a glutton coreling will be relative to the coreling’s size. If the ward is five inches by three inches it’s not likely to keep out an eight foot tall glutton coreling.

There we have my three entries. It’s taken me longer to finish than I had thought and I’d like to say that’s mostly due to work and other commitments, but I wouldn’t be able to keep a straight hand. See what I did there? Didcha? Never mind…hope you at least enjoyed.

Wow! An amazing set of entries. I love the characters created in the first and third stories and the bond described between Twilight Dancer and the Warded Man. Wonderful job!

Posted on June 1, 2012 at 8:00 am by megelizabeth
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Frizhope Demon

Posted by Meg

Here is an entry from Ben.

Dear Peter, Dear Meg,

I’ve been one of many French fans of The Warded Man cycle for a long time, and since I received a signed plate from you, I’ve never been able to find a way to tell you how grateful I was.

I’m grateful for your writing, to Meg for your blog …

Carry on writing as you do; it gives us emotions, dreams, hopes and we need it all!

Here my entry for the contest.

Unfortunately, my ten month toddler can do better than me with pencils so I’ll have to do the whole job with words …

There, is in a first part, the demon description, and in a second part, a made up story putting up one of those on stage.

Hope you’ll like it!

Yours,

Ben.

Frizhope Demon:

It’s a specific sort of demon as they are very few in the Core.

They come out at night at specific location and time of the year, usually answering a Mind demon’s call on punctual massive destruction attacks.

Frizhope is kind of a demon’s Big Mama for heavy duty, as much as ultimate weapon.

Description:

As big a common barn; it’s shaped as a hornet.

The insect like head with massive mandibles atop a ridiculously small body attached on a gigantic, disproportionate abdomen.

Larges hardened chitinuous organic plates cover the upper side whereas the underside is kind of raw pulsating and moving flesh.

The abdomen finishes with a protuberant spear long sting, folded under the abdomen.

That sting is a as much a razor sharp spade as a syringe, always ready to expulse corrosive and toxic fluids secreted in abundance from over fertile abdomen’s glands.

Stories tell that an added needle on the sting allows him to inseminate major demons so as to bring them enhanced strength, healing, morphing even, thanks to demonic sap injunction.

The abdomen is the sap and venom factory, but in addition, it protects and carries multiple embryonic demons enclosed as a “core” part, ready for expulsion in the heat of an assault if need be.

Devoid of legs or wings, it seemed to levitate for the (few) observers still alive (even fewer).

What they couldn’t see is that the Frizhope is sustained at an average of two meters above ground thanks to thousands ever moving organics tendrils whose role is to insure mobility.

Rummaging the ground they’re on contact with, those tendrils have to draw nourishment for inside siblings, and are the direct link between Core and demons outside getting sonic wave instructions emitted through Frizhope’s synapses.

The Frizhope is surrounded by a demon swarm whose jellyfish likeness recalls the abdomen’s underside on which they are umbilical linked.

No one alive have been able to testify of a dawn where a Frizhope would have been defeated.

Only ultimate destruction, desolation and sterilization are symptoms of a Frizhope passing.

Nota : The French translation for hornet in french is frelon: Thus Frizhope for frelon zero hope

Victor clenched his jaw for the second time this morning.

Fully awake since dusk yesterday, the whole perimeter of protective wards around his farm had been strangely quiet through the night.

Something was wrong with the demons.

Tougher and stronger, the new wards the living legend Arlen had taught them a few months past could be paying off.

Standing facing Bert, his chief, mentor, and friend in the messenger office of Plöermail, Victor was uneasy and almost tempted to decline this mission of a new kind.

But what Bert asked was of course duty, and Victor had lived his whole life for it.

The coming of thaodan’s night in less than two days made him think twice.

-“You know I can’t send Martin to the beach. He hasn’t recovered yet.”

Indeed, Martin was still shaking with fever after an epic fight with a Shrimps vase demon that had brought him below sea level.

Only the intensive coast messengers training in breathing and swimming allowed him to survive two days and night in a long forgotten sub sea creek.

-“I’ll go; you know I will, Bert.”

-“We are the sixteenth of May, Victor, and the stellar conjunction is reaching its peak at thaodan’s night the eighteenth. If there is one chance, we have to take it.”

-“Let me back home this morning. I have yet to fix a few wardposts and I’ll be on the road at noon.”

-“I won’t say no, but hurry, we need to know how Martin survived. Feeding on those algaes should have killed him if not the tremendous periwinkle demons.”

Something was wrong with the nights.

Patting his horse’s mane, riding out of the little town, he could feel the fear spreading its venomous tendrils around both his heart and reason.

He’ll have to go fast along the road with little rest if he wanted to be back home for Thaodan’s night.

Something was wrong with the Core.

His mother had given him the gift that allowed him to sense the core pulsating: like a living organ in the night, and a purring cat on daylight.

Thirty years of feelings from your night enemy’s very place had given him the patterns.

He could feel the demons squirting from the buzzing underneath at night, and the silent rumble in the morning.

For the past few months, the frame he was used to was changing.

There was no more rest after the night, as if despite the great effort of the night, demons were still pulsating, their venomous blood boiling.

The thought of Arlen coming through the village gave him some comfort.

He had been lucky enough to spend some time with him that day. Arlen had listened carefully speaking little but giving much.

Launching his horse into gallop, he would ride straight to the shores, discover that creek Martin survived into and report back whatever it is that precise spot had of specifics.

* * *

“Alive, I’m alive,” thought Victor, as consciousness took a bit lower the buzzing in his head.

Quickly checking if fingers and toes were moving, he became slowly aware that a soft light was glowing at the back of the cave.

Riding in the stormy night along the high cliffs atop the maddened sea, rock and sand demons had unleashed an apocalypse of violence he had never before witnessed.

Thinking of his beloved ones falling from the cliffs, he fainted while drowning between rocks and foam.

Thumping in his head Victor reckoned the pattern attuned with the reddish glow. Ramping further he could feel stronger as he was nearing the now visible source.

A power Nodus, he had found it somehow; it was there: one of the scarce holy locations in the world where nature in its beauty formed a ward of its own.

A vertical crack, with on the right side, a single dot below a horizontal slash crossing the middle axe in its centre was shining in its powerful elemental glory.

Lying on his back, he watched the ceiling of this narrow pit registering this unique and powerful sign where Mother Earth repelled the scum coursing through her.

Instinctively he used his knife whose tip shimmered as he copied the holy ward on his forearm flesh.

* * *

Three stones in a circle were all Victor could distinguish as he emerged in the diminished daylight.

The whole surroundings shimmered as the first star in the sky marked the end of the day.

This place, Victor understood with an enhanced consciousness, was where the core massed its malevolent power in order to corrupt the holy place in the eve of Thaodan’s night:

Before, the stellar link with earth was to be the strongest and demons the weakest.

Still vibrating from the Nodus closeness, his right arm bled anew with a mix of liquid light shining brighter as night grew its fangs.

“That is what you were up to, then,” thought Victor, assessing the dark and darker cursed place.

In the way of a wounded snake, demons were retreating from the land to throw their whole might against this place at that time of the year.

His temples drummed as thick fog arose from the plain.

His fingers were chilled as wind blew stronger.

His legs were giving away as dark forms took shapes.

“Come to me,” thought Victor.

“I reject you no more …”

“Express yourself, you my ever present companion.”

“You, my first opponent since I decided to be your vassal no more,” whispered the messenger.

Shouting to the spiralling darkness amid the stone circle:

“Explode in me at last in all your rage so I may see your true face, you who laid sleeping in me all those years.”

“Show me your shape, you … my fear.”

Earth and wind demons roam the land they take shape on.

He doesn’t see them yet but he perceives the first hiss and roar of hate from the teeming shapes.

Fear infuses in him as a single drop of blood would in clear water.

Grim crackling sounds of demons tearing at each other are everywhere in their absolute violence.

Amid the three standing stones, a barn sized demon materializes.

Hornet shaped with swords like mandibles crackling in the now cold air, the gigantic ignominy soars in its buzzing and roaring glory.

Dwarfing the head, a disproportionate abdomen is pulsating with a thousand lives of its own.

Protected with chitinuous plates on the top, pink spongy raw flesh oozes gory slime in tendrils rummaging the soil it is erupting from.

Going back to the basics of the messenger’s training, again and again, reaching even deeper inside him; he tries to move his body according to his breathing.

“Prepare your mind, awaken your senses, and dig inside yourself to reach the emotions you’ll need,” recites Victor.

The old messenger mantra soothes his senses, but frustration swarms as his body does not answer.

Cancelling any resolve he might have built-up, a roaring sound tears in his brain like a wasp snuggled in the ear, biting straight through it.

The numbness mask Victor was desperately building crashes in one of sheer terror.

Raping the earth it is standing on, each of the many tendrils is vibrating and stretching as the malevolent mass is arisen from the surface leaving only space for a spear long sting.

Rescuing his sanity, tearing the fear veil, his old friend’s voice comes to mind: “Ugly init’? Ain’t know if they got to reproduce, but mirrors should kill’em as much as sun!”

Victor sees the pattern anew.

The fear is there engulfing him whole but he can feel again.

Coursing through his arm, the Nodus-ward is pulsating power in rage, welcoming fear and using it to fuel his resolve.

The pattern becomes obvious.

Demons, as enslaved in the mightiness of this Core’s essence form, are dancing and evolving around the beast.

Feasting on weaker siblings, the strongest demons dare impale themselves on the venomous dart, convulsing in pain or bliss as their eyes shine with something they never showed before: sentience.

-“Breathe, keep your eyes shut and breathe,” he told himself. “And feel for yourself what earth has given you.”

Indeed, thinking he was bleeding in his immobility, the puddle formed by the falling drops at his feet shines, radiating reddish light brighter as darkness tries to take over.

Flowing now freely from the ward he sizzled on his arm, his blood pours freely through it as he feels fluids coming back from earth through every pore with an enhanced strength infused back to him.

The beating of his temples, he understands it now, never was from the core, but was an extension from the suffering voice of Mother Earth violated by demons.

Now, on Thaodan’s night, he knows it, the beating gives way to a drumming sound attuned with his heart, whose moves resonates with the celestial vault power.

Sky and earth get united thanks to a human being, able to hear and sing the elemental war anthem against demon’s corruption.

The first contact is disorienting. He hasn’t felt like moving yet, but an air demon in its hunger frenzy is melting, shrinking, turning into ashes as its sinks down, impaled on his raised arm.

He tries not to see the ugliness of this intelligence able to bring destruction; he wants to believe in the beauty of life and what hope might offer.

The insectoïd head turns to face him.

This demon understands.

It knows he is there for its destruction.

The sting disengages from an earth demon which size had doubled, and immediately throws its whole psychic might against Victor, launching spores and minions toward him.

Victor sets aside the pain searing through his head, as if countless needles sink into his brain and sets toward this demon’s breeder, face of what could be life without daylight.

He feels the pain of blows raining on him.

Even if no claws or fangs may reach him, impacts make him pivot and duck, always set in his objective’s direction.

A vicious killing blow from a sand demon breaks his ribs before exploding in a spray of mud cascading around him.

Victor tries to ignore the agony tearing his body and soul apart and his steps turn into a run.

Intoning the holy chant, he feels the multiple resonances of this one note he has heard his whole life.

His cries wrap him in the cleansing power of revenge.

Still birthing spores, the demon has no way to move fast enough to get rid of him and start to circle the shining bug dangerously coming its way.

Cutting venomous tendrils, Victor wants to reach the beginning of the abdomen, separate head from body.

In a last spring of energy, thrusting forward, he plunges his arm in the scorching gory mud of the abdomen, shouting at the top of his lungs as the dart unmercifully pierces his kidneys and tears his spine in shreds.

Spread on the grass, face turned sideways, he inhales for the first and last time the delicate fragrance of nature in the middle of the night as a Mind demon melts back to the Core between three standing stones.

Thanks to Ben for sending in his entry from France! What an intense and detailed story. I am terrified!

Posted on May 31, 2012 at 3:00 pm by megelizabeth
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A Host of New Demons

Posted by Meg

Here is the first entry from Mia.

Hi. My name is Mia and I’m apparently addicted to demons. Photos are of my demon menagerie or graduates of my Coreling Certification Course perhaps. A couple of emails will follow of demons I’ve backstories for. Didn’t really plan to send anything when I started, but they were so much fun to make I just had to share. So this isn’t really a contest entry, especially since I didn’t follow some rules. It’s my way of saying I’m really looking forward to The Daylight War.

Using the second photo as a guide, from left to right they are: cupping demon, spectre demon, cairn demons, hollow demon, prickly demon (the black and white in front), modular demon (long and snakelike), split demon (in split form — one on top of the hollow demon, the other on top of the modular demon).

The .doc file is of the only demon I created without a figure, just a story. I thought of it and wrote it on the subway! Brett style! Don’t forget, however, that I’m not a writer so be kind or maybe read it after a few drinks.

The Cluster

Dusk. The sun wanes as the moon rises, a seesaw of opposing lights. When the sun shines, it signals safety – for work, for play, for the simple freedom of being outside. The rising of the moon is as a siren warning of danger, urging people to take refuge. To be caught outside is to wager one’s life. The moon and the night belong to creatures that revel in fear, pain and mayhem.

A boy intently gazes at the horizon from his bedroom window, scarcely blinking. He’s on the lookout for ‘The Gang’, a group of corelings emerging from deep in the ground, stirring pain deep in his gut. Small and airborne, these demons work in perverted synergy to overcome their prey. Vox demons descend, spraying a victim’s mouth with a tar-like spit to seal it shut and silence any cry for help. Hummingbird-sized sonorous demons disable with shrieks that burst eardrums. While victims are doubled over with pain, oculus demons swoop in like vultures to claw at eyes. Mute, deaf and blind, one despairs of an effective defense or even rescue.

The boy knows the winged fish-like body and giant maw of the sonorous demon, the winged torso of the oculus demon with its disproportionately small head and clawed appendages, and the brachycephalic head and stout bill of the vox demon. The boy watched his father die from this window, caught outside the maze and surrounded by corelings. The boy saw his father clutch at his face, then his ears. Finally, he saw demons jostling one another to peck, claw and tear at his father as he was disoriented and writhing. The boy holds tight to this memory of his warrior father dying helpless and alone, as tight as a hungry baby suckling on a mother’s teat. It fuels his rage and steels his determination.

The boy watches ‘The Gang’ every night, observing every move, spying weaknesses, mentally noting stalking and attacking patterns. One day, the boy will be old enough to be a warrior. One day, he won’t be looking out his window anymore but will be face to face with ‘The Gang’. One day, he will avenge his father’s death.

One day. And everyone will know his name.

The last four are just closeups of the ones without written backstories yet.


The cupping demon is green with a body is full of suction cups.

Next photo shows the cairn demons (4 varieties), masters of camouflage and stealth.

The third is the spectre demon, most vicious in shadows and experts at obfuscation and confusion.

The last 2 are photos of the modular demon in 2 modes: deconstructed and integrated.

Thanks to Mia for sending in her demons! What a fantastic spread of corelings.

Posted on May 31, 2012 at 8:00 am by megelizabeth
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Bazille Coreling

Posted by Meg

Kai sends us a demon from a demon’s point of view.

Its eyes opened.

Black and beady, they soaked in the darkness that enveloped its newly shaped form, swiveling back and forth in the star enlightened night, as it surveyed its surroundings in an attempt to find something to satiate the burning rage that filled him from within.  He could feel the fires of the Core far below him, a connection that drove him and all of his kind in their attempt to reassert their kind into their rightful place of control over the humans.

He was one of the more unique breeds of the corelings.  A bastard child of the mimics, the Bazille was only able to take the shape of something that it consumed.  There was no retention of that animal or humans abilities, but rather just an impression of its stolen self.

On almost all levels of competency that were measured by the ranks of corelings, the Bazille feel miserably short.  In its true shape, it was small, a hand shorter than the clay coreling, lacking in natural armor and strength, and was forced to rely on its cunning and natural ability for stealth.  This combined with its particular talents set it apart and above most of his counterparts.

Its one physical proficiency arose from the ability to detach its jaw as it prepared to bite, allowing it to expand its mouth around anything short of a stout oak’s trunk.  Sharp, biting teeth rimmed its jaw beyond the line of sight, down into its throat lining up like a set bear trap, just waiting to engulf its nearest victim.

This ability allowed him to consume its prey, forcing down small and large objects alike into its prodigious stomach where some form of magic of conversion took place, creating a shifting that transformed him into a likeness of the creature that had just been eaten.

The second, and ultimately more important, trait that allowed for the Bazille’s rise in the ranks of importance, was through the act of impression came the ability to escape the pull back down into the Core for a brief period of time.  Each time it varied, sometimes it lasted minutes, sometimes a hour.  He was sometimes charged by the princes to gather info but most often it was spent taking unparalleled, evil joy in mauling some unfortunate family that had the misfortune of its house being far enough away from neighbors that its screams weren’t heard.  It had something to do with the protection gained by the Impression, but eventually the sun’s despicable rays burned through the shell and once again he was yanked back down to the dark depths of the Core.

A shock of excitement that never got old took a joy ride up and down his spine every time the shock bloomed onto the unsuspecting faces of his victims as their favorite pet opened its maw and consumed as messily as possible on of their own.

Tonight he had formed in the wide expanse of a recently harvested field.  He rose out of the ground on all fours, hunched low and close to the ground, always trying to wait to show himself at the last possible moment.  The putrid smell of cut corn stalks hit its wide nostrils, grimacing as it turned its stomach.  He assumed that it probably smelled good to the humans, but nothing but freshly torn skin and blood waiting to be spilt perked up its taste buds.  To his kind, nothing but that smelled or tasted remotely palatable.

He began to move, his movements were sly and subtle as he moved towards the west, hoping to get every second he could away from the inevitable rising of tomorrow’s sun.  There was a small house on the far edge of the field and the fire of a family’s evening activities shone brightly through a warded window.  As he passed through the gate into the front lawn of the house he felt the awkward and slightly painful burn of wards that weren’t drawn for him but still hurt nonetheless.  His kind was rare and the wards that affected him and his brethren hadn’t been rediscovered following the Great War.

He’d heard the rumors of late concerning the one covered in wards, the one who had taken down the giant coreling last fall.  He’d heard the rumors spoken in hushed and fearful tones that the human was rediscovering wards long thought lost.  He’d heard a lot in his day, but if there was anything he’d learned throughout the years was that most rumors were overblown and even if it turned out to be something even close to reality that worry was for another night.  This night was for eating.

His dark shelled form slid quietly through the shadows of house making a circuit of the house looking for something bite into before he made his way into the home.  The smell of the humans was beginning to overwhelm his senses and any modicum of patience was starting to slip away under the wave of anger and rage until he heard the quiet purr of a farm cat coming from the rear of the house.  He moved closer, quieter than before, until he hovered over the small form, his tongue flitting out in tiny quick flicks as he licked his lips in anticipation.

The moment passed quickly as his teeth making quick and silent business of the animal’s body.  They were bloody and covered in tiny bits of hair and gore as they spread into a wide, villainous smile as the swirl of magic and mystery began to churn in his stomach as the transformation began.  It had never seen what the change looked like, but from his perspective it happened in less than five breaths.  A few moments of heavy breathing and then the world shifted to reflect its new vantage point.

The scent of flesh was still the same but the burn to consume was stronger after the transformation.  It always was; the necessity to replenish the magic expelled coupled with the hunger made for a condition that raged until his whole body trembled with barely contained energy.  Each step was troublesome as his new feet moved silently towards the door where he raised its paw, claws extended, and began to scratch at the door.

It didn’t take many scratches as he heard footsteps begin, moved towards the front window and he watched the curtain get pulled aside and looked up to see a small human peek outside.  She looked out to see what was causing the noise; a look of confusion spread across her face until she looked down and saw him.  She smiled, a quiet giggle escaping past her lips as she moved to open the door to let the cat in.

The Bazille would have laughed along had its feline form allowed it, but settled for a smile, another smile of joy but for a completely different and much more malicious reason as it cracked its jaws in preparation for the evening’s snack.

Thank you to Kai for this entry! I love that it was from the point of view of the demon! Very creepy and creative.

Posted on May 30, 2012 at 3:00 pm by megelizabeth
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Half-Demon

Posted by Meg

A new entry from Joseph L. Selby. You can read more at: http://josephlselby.com

New Coreling: Half-Demon

The Warded Man waited in the clearing as the first mists of twilight seeped up through the ground. The demons would come soon. For three days, he and Twilight Dancer had done battle outside the ruin. He had come in search of ancient wards, following a map that had proved true in every way but for the treasure at the end. Any wards that might have existed on the tumbles of stone had long since been washed away by the passage of time.

Three days it took him to search the ruins before he was certain there was nothing worth the finding. Three nights he spent fighting wood demons. The ruins sat in the deepest parts of Fort Angiers’ forests. He made camp in a nearby clearing, setting up his Messenger’s circle for when the ichor grew too thick and obscured his combat wards. He would step inside, clean himself, and resume the battle. The journey would not be entirely wasted. He would take as many of them as possible before his time here was finished.

Twilight Dancer grew impatient, sniffing the air and stomping a hoof, as anxious as he for the night’s battle to begin. The sun slipped behind the treeline, the forest grew dark, and the mist danced on the breeze, but all was silent. No fire demons dared come this deep into the forest, but the first wind demons should have taken flight by now. He watched the trees. Woodies found easy camouflage among the mighty trunks and thick branches, but they only stirred with the wind. Nothing walked. Nothing hunted. Nothing came to fight as it had for the three nights before.

A branch snapped and the Warded Man turned to face it. His robe lay discarded in his circle. He stood only in his loin cloth, fists in front of him, ready to begin his nightly dance. He saw a shape pass between the trees, caught in the light of an early moon. It was short for a wood demon and lithe, more like a man than a demon. The Warded Man waited. There were no settlements nearby, no wood cutters or messengers to wander the forest at night. He was alone, or so he had thought.

The figure turned toward the clearing, clearly a man robed and with a turban.

“Jardir?” The Warded Man asked.

No, it was not the Shar’Dama Ka. This man stood taller, nearly seven feet if not more. The blue light of the moon turned his robe and turban black, but beneath the muck and the mud, the Warded Man could see how his clothing had one been entirely white.

The Krasian stepped into the clearing. He walked with a walking stick but he did not limp nor did his back curl with age. He leveled his stick and the metal point of a spear glinted in the moonlight. His robe was tattered, his turban frayed. What flesh was exposed looked much the same as Arlen’s, black ink tattooed upon brown Krasian skin. So many were there, it looked in this dim light as if he had black lines tattooed across him in whirls and crisscrosses, as if his skin were made of wicker.

“Do you seek succor?” the Warded Man asked. He did not lower his fists.

The stranger walked freely in the night. His eyes sat sunken in his face, deep bags beneath them of one who spends his night fighting rather than sleeping. His flesh drew taught against his bones, lined with white cracks like aged leather. His joints were knobby and his fingers skeletal.

The man smiled and Arlen took an instinctive step back. His teeth were narrow and gnarled. His gums bled black ichor. Tongues of fire ate at the gaps and licked at his lips.

The man slammed his spear butt on the ground and fire burst atop his turban. The flames formed a royal circlet above his head.

“Bow to me.” He moved his mouth, he worked his jaw, but the sound did not come from his throat like a normal man’s. It came a whisper in Arlen’s head. The Warded Man pawed at his ear, swatting away a mosquito that was not there. “You must give the proper respect. Bow.”

“I bow to no man, not duke, not Shar’Dama Ka. Nor do I bow to demons.” Which was this man?

The Warded Man placed each ward he could make out in the low light. Of those he recognized, their purpose matched his own. Wards on his fists for punching. Wards on his chest for protection and turning away fire spit, and so on. If he had been born Krasian, this man might be his reflection in the waters of the Oasis of Dawn.

The memory chased up his spine. Arlen felt the deep pull of the Core, that insubstantial haze just as he had when a wood demon tried to draw him down to the Core outside Cutter’s Hollow. His head snapped up and he understood.

“Kaji.”

The half-demon stood straighter, taller if that was possible. “You are almost ready, dal’Sharum. Together we will wage Sharak Ka. Together we will make war against the daylight.”

Thank you to Joseph for that intriguing story. I love the description of the half-demon as a reflection of Arlen if he had grown up in Krasia. Beautifully written!

Posted on May 30, 2012 at 8:00 am by megelizabeth
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