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One of the amazing things about storytelling is that no matter how hard the author tries to make a statement or express an opinion, the audience will still look at it through their own perspective, and no two people see things exactly the same. This is a challenge for writers that can be frustrating, but it’s also the very thing that makes some stories stand the test of time and reach mass appeal. Everyone reads into it what they want to see.

I’ve been thinking of this topic ever since my friends Matt and Dave and I had the following facebook comment debate after Matt posted this status update:

Matt would get more done if he had a writing partner.
June 24 at 10:44am

Comment Matt at 10:45am June 24
Or better, a writing assistant. And a million dollars.

Comment David at 10:56am June 24
I’d get writing done if I wasn’t so damn busy all the time…or wasn’t so damn lazy when I wasn’t so damn busy.

Comment Matt at 11:00am June 24
You should be my writing assistant. Or give me a million dollars and I will be yours.

Comment Peter V. Brett at 11:03am June 24

Do or do not. There is no “try”:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PcjnbIF1yAA

Comment David at 11:26am June 24
Yoda’s also the guy who said to Anakin and Luke, don’t worry about your friends and family if they are in trouble, don’t try to help them, and if they die, don’t mourn them…now get back to work, padawan. And thats the kind of thinking that led to Yoda getting his ass beat. In the end, those beliefs killed him (thematically speaking..he died after Luke proved that friends and family were necessary, negating the stupid teachings of the Old Jedi. Yoda died telling Luke about his sister.) Its why Luke is the better Jedi.

Comment Peter V. Brett at 11:36am June 24
Always with you what can not be done.

Yoda was telling Luke that flying off half-cocked on your emotions leads to the dark side, and guess what? He was right. Luke got his ass handed to him in Cloud City and Leia and Chewie had already escaped. Then, in the DSv2, it is only when Luke stops fighting and accepts the potential sacrifice of his friends for the greater good that he is able to turn his father back and defeat the emperor.

Stop making excuses and get to work.

Comment David at 12:01pm June 24
Not saying it can’t be done, saying it involves a little more time and stress than you might be considering, s’all.
Yoda explained (to Annakin) the Jedi, belief that friends and family are not to be considered, because the Jedi calling is bigger than personal relationships. Palpatine nurtured Anakin’s caring for personal things. When Anakin was burned, Palpatine showed great caring for him personally. Of course, Palpatine was evil and ruthless and manipulative, but he did care. Anakin was unable to reconcile the two sides, and it drove him over the edge. Meanwhile, the Old Jedi got what they deserved, or at least what was coming to them.

Luke, went through the same crises. He was defeated, but where yoda said it would destroy him, it did not…Luke survived, taught himself, saved his friends. He completed his training on his own. He reconciled what his father could not…

Comment David at 12:11pm June 24
When Luke flew off all “half cocked” to Cloud City, it was to save his friends from ambush, from trap, from execution by his nemesis. When he was in DSv2, it was in a war, and hey, people die in a war, you accept that it might happen before the war. 2 different situations with very different responses. So, it’s not that he accepted the sacrifice of his friends and thats why he won…he fought like a banshee when he thought that his friends were in trouble, and he defeated Vader because of it…he put his all into winning that fight, for them. He stopped instead when he saw what his anger was making him become, when he saw what he was doing to his father. It is when he accepted that this was his father, and that he could use the love inherent in that personal relationship to get through to him, that he laid down his weapon. It’s why he’s the better Jedi.

Also, a case could be made that Leia only escaped cloud city *because* Luke was there to distract Vader.

Comment Matt at 12:17pm June 24
I used to value Jedi wisdom more BEFORE Lucas told us in Episode I that “the Force” is actually just an intergalactic STD. Stoopit midichlorians.

Comment Matt at 12:18pm June 24
Also, Yoda followed the Jedi Code and lived his life alone in a swamp. Vader went dark and got a fleet of sweet battleships and a clone army. I bet he could even have a writing assistant and one million space credits, if he wanted…just to bring things back to my original point.

Comment Peter V. Brett at 12:20pm June 24
The rebellion started long before Luke and Han ever got involved, so the ambush in Cloud City should be considered a wartime action. Vader would have been distracted waiting for Luke whether he actually came or not. And defeating Vader (physically) in DSv2 was irrelevant. The Emperor was the real enemy, and he was only defeated when Luke was spiritually at peace.

Comment David C. Funke at 1:22pm June 24
interesting how 2 people how interpret the same saga in 2 such different ways. I say, Luke ended up on his own path, nothing like the Jedi before him, and was better for it (the best, in fact). You say he ended up on the same path as the Jedi before him, and in that found his true power. Wild, man, just wild.

Comment Matt Bergin at 1:30pm June 24
All this reminds me of how I no longer have light saber sounds on my PSP game. šŸ™

Comment David at 1:37pm June 24
Do you at least get ring-of-the-schwartz sounds?

Comment Peter V. Brett at 2:51pm June 24
I think the sign of a great story is one that resonates with everyone in their own way. Stories that beat you over the head with a subjective moral don’t stand the test of time.

The fact that we can disagree so deeply on our life’s philosophy and still be friends, though, gives me hope for the Star Trek future of human unity than the Star Wars future of bleak politics and war.

Comment Peter V. Brett at 3:19pm June 24
I kind of want to just paste this comment thread on my blog.

Posted on July 5, 2009 at 11:32 pm by PeatB
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Interrobang Redux?!

Sometimes, when people disagree, we shout at one another, as shown writing by an exclamation point (!). Sometimes, we ask each other questions, denoted by a question mark (?). Sometimes we do both at once, and aren’t sure which piece of punctuation to use. This is especially true when the question is rhetorical.

The accepted literary solution to this problem is narrator intrusion:

“What is your fucking problem?” he screamed.

This is a perfectly acceptable solution, and one often required in order to provide more detailed emotional information.

However, there is a school of thought that says sometimes, that extra information is unneeded, in which case you’re wasting characters, and it is acceptable to go with the more informal:

“What is your fucking problem?!”

This is known as the interrobang. By simply combining the two pieces of punctuation, you get all the impact of both without needing extra words.Ā  I’m not sure how far back this solution dates. Wikipedia describes a combined symbol that was created in 1962, but I would wager using the two symbols together dates back further, to the origin of comics, at least, where authors needed to conserve space to make room for art, but also had the advantage of that art and word balloons to denote speaker and emotion.

For decades now, “low” forms of literature, advertisements, low budget fanzines, dimestore novels, etc., always pressed for space, have adopted the shortcut, and it was widely popularized in the last 20 years by common e-mail and text message usage.

Granted, this parlance has also brought us such wonders as :), omg, lol, ~@, <3, and wtf.

Or WTF!?

To a modern reader, these shortcuts contain a wealth of information, but they are also considered cutesy, their use considered beneath ā€œhighā€ literature. Most editors don’t want to soil prose novels by bathing in that kiddie pool, and in this I generally agree. But I think there are a few fish in that pool we can catch, wash the pee off of, and transplant to the adult pool, making fishing more delicious to our adult palates. Because that’s how literary evolution has always worked. Remember when it was taboo to use “ain’t”?

So I say we should open our doors, let the interrobang in, and just make sure he washes his hands before dinner and brushes his teeth after. He ain’t hurtin’ no one, no matter what those stodgy old 50’s proofreading books we still adhere to say.

However, amongst the hordes of publishing professionals I know, including many of my own friends and family, there is division on this issue, with the majority in favor of the status quo. Many times I feel like I am a lonely voice, shouting in the dark.

Loyal Peephole readers may recall that I whined about this the last time I was editing a book, and it sparked something of a debate. Now that I’m in editing mode again, let’s test the water once more.

Anyone out there want to weigh in? Can I get some love for the interrobang, or y’all still hatin’?

Posted on July 2, 2009 at 5:51 pm by PeatB
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Fan Art

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(PM minis created by Loey on Gaia)

I am a fortunate man, for I am surrounded by wonderful people. My friends and family are jewels, and my baby is an incredible joy.

If that was the extent of my good fortune, as my Jewish friends say, Dayenu. It would have been enough.

But I haven’t even mentioned my readers. My precious, precious readers, who have not only made me a bestseller in multiple languages, not only written amazing poetry based on my work, but some of them go above and beyond the call of duty and even make fan art.

Take 17 year old Phil from the UK, who was inspired after reading The Painted Man to create this image:

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There’s also 18 year old Iris from Germany, who loved Das Lied der Dunkelheit so much that she made her own ward grimoire by customizing a leather notebook. Check this out. It’s amazing:

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Not to be outdone, we have 22 year old Nic from the UK, who, after finishing The Painted Man, decided to create an image of The Painted Man fighting wood demons for a Good vs Evil art competition on one of the greatest sites on the web, deviantART.

How cool is this?

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I love how the wood demon (with those crazy branchlike claws!) is only half-formed from the mist, and the soft glow of the wards on The Painted Man’s skin. And check out the expression on his face. That demon is going to get his ass kicked, but good.

Things like this thrill me beyond words. The inspiration I drew from comics and fantasy novels as a child led me to create many pieces of fan art myself, and cemented my decision to be an author myself one day.The very idea that my own work is inspiring others in the same way is mind-blowing, and when I see results like these, I have a full on geek attack. It’s an incredible honor.

These pics, and others, will appear permanently in the Fan Art section of my Creations page, once I finish all the code.

Posted on June 27, 2009 at 2:39 pm by PeatB
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The Great Bazaar

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At long last, I am pleased to announce the news that The Great Bazaar, and Other Stories has been sold to Subterranean Press. The Great Bazaar is a back up story I wrote for the forthcoming UK deluxe version of The Painted Man from Voyager Books. Essentially chapter 16.5 of The Warded/Painted Man, this story takes place in the three year gap between Arlen’s leaving Fort Miln and his searching the ruins of Anoch Sun. I think of those three years as an adventure filled period in Arlen’s life, filled with exciting stories. The Great Bazaar is the first of these, and one that I had planned long ago, showing how Arlen found the lost city in the first place.

The Great Bazaar was designed to be an introduction to Arlen and his world for new readers, as well as filling in a gap in the first book for people who have already read and enjoyed The Warded Man. It also takes place in Fort Krasia, and will be a wonderful appetizer for the sequel, The Desert Spear, due in April 2010.

The Great Bazaar and Other Stories will be published as a limited edition pocket-sized hardcover book released in early 2010 (well prior to The Desert Spear), containing the 14,000 word GB novelette, plus an additional 6,000 words of introductions, deleted scenes and supplemental materials. It will be printed in a run of 1,000 copies, with an additional 250 copies signed and numbered by yours truly.

I can’t wait!

Posted on June 25, 2009 at 11:34 am by PeatB
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Haiku Awards Ceremony

Words fail me when I try to describe how awesome the Haiku Review contest was. Even reading through the entries again just now I found myself laughing put loud, shaking my head in amazement, and looking up cool words like ā€œrevenantā€ (which I, as a SF writer, have absolutely no excuse for not knowing).

I know it sounds trite, but this is a time when I wish everyone could be a winner, and that I had an endless stream of goodies to give out and could send a gift to every contributor. I’m only going to mention a handful of the dozens of poems submitted, but they are all wonderful, each in their own way. I want to thank everyone who took the time toĀ  submit. Each one is a joy I’ll cherish forever.

Alas, my little stash of neato Warded Man swag is somewhat limited at the moment, and I want to save some of it for more contests like this one. Even so, I’ve decided to up the # of prize-winners from two to four. Just cuz.

So, without further ado…

Honorable Mentions (no prize):

The sun is falling
The corelings are stirring
The wards are intact

Posted by Karen Mottola

I really like this poem by Karen Mottola. It is stark and beautiful and would have been a serious contender, but alas, line 2 has 6 syllables instead of 7.

Corelings rise at night
Safety lies behind the wards
Freedom lies outside

Posted by Jennifer

In all honesty, this poem is quite possibly my favorite of all. It sums up Arlen’s plight and path beautifully, wasting no words at all. It’s a poem that really shows the power of the Haiku. This was the tweet of its day. All the folks on Twitter are just a bunch of crude amateur Johnny Come Latelys to the art form.

So why didn’t this one get a prize? Well, full disclosure, Jennifer and I have known each other since first grade, and she’s one of my closest friends who’s been listening to me talk about Arlen since before the Towers fell. Like my buddies Matt and Myke, she felt this gave her an unfair advantage, and should disqualify her from winning a prize, so she’s recused herself.

Still, good fucking poem, right?

Fourth Prize (Japanese Painted Man 1st edition book #2, autographed):

A guy fights demons
Using magical tattoos
Hell’s angel, indeed

Peeling arcs of paint
Shifting sand obscures a line
The wards are failing

Corelings take the wall
One-Arm brings granite chaos
The guards fall like rain

Centuries of fear
The tide is turned by a man
Not afraid to fight

Posted by Carrie Harris

Of course, this whole contest is Carrie’s fault. She’s been reviewing books in haiku now for…

Well, I don’t really know how long she’s been doing it, but a while.

Anyway, it was seeing her original review that gave me the idea for this contest, and it seems like even that review was her B game, since she put in some great alternates. I like the second one the best.

Third Prize (UK Painted Man 1st edition paperback, autographed):

Terror walked the night
But I took up its dread spear
Now the dark fears me

Posted by Alex

Really good. Alex wanted to throw an extra comma and an italic into the last line, but I think the words are stronger without. I’m a believer in dropping unnecessary formatting and punctuation in poetry.

Second Prize (The Warded Man 1st Edition hardcover, autographed):

Misty death rising
Demons forming as night falls
Outside warded doors

No willing fighters
Just remains and survivors
Hiding behind wards

Warded walls and doors
Fend off the hordes of demons
Draw well and check twice

Is he a monster?
Has he lost humanity
Battling demons?

I loved Warded Man
The characters made the book
Can’t wait to read more

Posted by Lauren

Pause to appreciate this body of work. Every one a serious contender. In some ways, though, I like the last one the best. If the purpose of a review is to let people know whether or not they should buy a book and why, this does an excellent job of boiling down all the essential elements of a positive review into 17 syllables.

First Prize (Autographed complete set of all three Japanese Painted Man 1st edition volumes):

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If anyone deserves to win, it’s Hon with his dueling Yin/Yang poems about the book itself and his experience reading it. In addition to writing stellar haiku, Hon went for all the extra credit points I mentioned on the blog, providing the poem in essentially three languages AND posting the first one as a book review on Amazon.co.uk. That is too cool.

Fair warning to take those extra credit options to heart in future contests!

Winners, please e-mail me at peat@www.petervbrett.com with your full name, address, and anything special you would like me to write in your signed copies.

Oh, and a special stuck-out tongue to Dave-Brendon DeBurgh, who promised to submit a poem he claimed would be LEGENDARY, but turned out to be Legen…

Wait for it…

Wait for it…

Nothing, because he never submitted it!

Look for my upcoming guest post on Dave’s blog, where I will be giving him shit for this, amongst whatever else I decide to write about.

Thanks again to all who joined in. If anyone has a good idea for another contest of this sort, just pop it in the comment section!

Posted on June 21, 2009 at 3:13 am by PeatB
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