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Stepsheet about the writing process

Instead of fully writing this blog, here is my stepsheet for it:

  • I’ve been pondering the writing process today. I do this sometimes, trying to impose order on chaos, process on instinct. The final formula eludes me (because it is different for everyone and is not and will never be a process that can be learned by rote, but I have a pretty decent approximation for myself
  • I am a plotter. I love making bulleted lists of my story ideas, including setting, motivations, POV, bits of witty dialogue, gags, etc. This is fun, and I can do it anywhere, on any device, whenever the mood strikes me
  • I then juggle these pieces, fitting them one by one into a chronological story in bulleted shorthand, breaking it out into story arcs, and those into chapters.
  • I call this a stepsheet. When the stepsheet is complete, I feel tremendous elation and accomplishment. It is full of typos, sentence fragments, redundancies, and extraneous information, but it contains the entire creative thrust of the story and a breakdown of every chapter and what needs to occur therein.
  • This, for me, is the creative process it is exciting and anything can happen
  • The writing process is, unfortunately, an entirely different animal
  • The writing process is turning that pack of ideas and shorthand notes into readable prose. One chapter at a time
  • I already wrote this. Why do I have to write it again?
  • It is tedious, but I finish the chapter.
  • Then I write it again. And again. And probably again after that, each time adding a sentence here and a cool metaphor there, evoking mood and tightening loose prose. Sometimes I add or cut a person from the scene. Split a big chapter into two smaller ones, or combine two chapter fragments into a whole.
  • I stress over all of it, but each time, it gets better.
  • Finally it is “done”. I add the chapter to the major file.
  • I feel tremendous elation and accomplishment and all is right with the world
  • Until its time to start the next chapter
  • When all the chapters for a full story arc are done, the rewrite/edit process starts all over again, studying the story arcs as a whole
  • When all those are done, the rewriting process begins again, examining the BOOK as a whole.
  • This “first” draft sent to test readers, agent, editor, etc.
  • This part of process is invaluable
  • Go through comments, queries, corrections. Track changes in the master file.
  • Final editing pass. “Second” draft sent to publisher
  • Book is sent to copyedit. Comes back to you to review tons of corrections, comments, queries about consistency of style and details of magic system, rules of created languages, name charts, etc.
  • Sometimes they mess with your polished prose, making it all blurry. You want to bark about it. Best to swallow that urge and just stet.
  • “Third” draft done.
  • After that is the proofread
  • “Fourth” draft
  • It goes to press, but readers keep spotting little typos, or someone’s name has two spellings, or whatever. these are included in subsequent printings.
  • I get tired just thinking about it. But I also wouldn’t trust anyone other than me to do it.
  • I wish I could just write the original bulleted list and move on
  • This stepsheet written almost entirely from my iPhone on my 5 mile walk through the park.

    Posted on November 18, 2010 at 2:24 pm by PeatB
    Filed under Craft, Musings, Writing
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    Portuguese Pastry Party

    Hi, everyone. This is Dani, Peat’s wife. Those of you who know me are aware of my love of baked goods. French, Italian, Greek, Entenmann’s, Duncan Hines, you name it. So when Peat returned from his awesome trip to Portugal laden down with pure Portuguese Pastries, I was extremely pleased! (I mean, naturally I was pleased he was home at all, but even more so since he brought some sweets!)

    So after we put Cassie to bed, we settled on the couch in front of three different delicious-looking desserts and a glass of Ginja, which is a delightful sour-cherry liqueur. (Peat also came home with a bottle of Moscatel Roxo but we haven’t opened that yet.)

    We started off with the world-famous Pastéis de Belém, given to him as a gift by two bloggers who interviewed him, Margarida Cruz from Segredo dos Livros, and Patrícia Pessegueiro from Pedacinho Literário. Peat kept going on about how sweet Margarida and Patrícia were, and what a great time he had talking to them (we’ll link to those articles when they are posted).

    The Pastéis de Belém were a delightful custardy-pastry sort of thing, kind of like a cross between a Napoleon and a cannoli in tartlet form. Sweet, light, and, well, custardy, which I love.

    The next confections were queijadas from Casa Do Preto in Sintra. They were sort of like egg custard tartlets. Also delicious. These were picked up to commemorate his trip out to Sintra for lunch on the first day of his trip. Apparently he ate at a fancy restaurant full of famous Portuguese actors and musicians and then drove up to the local castle.

    The last were Tortas de Azeitao, which are a regional specialty in Setúbal, where Peat’s host and editor at Gailivro/1001 Mundos, Pedro Reisinho, is from. They were kind of like a cross between a Greek pantespani and a rum-soaked sponge cake without the rum. Moist, dense, and sweet. Like a high-quality Twinkie, and I mean that in a good way!

    So, here I am, 2 pounds heavier and wishing that I had gone to Portugal with Peat, if only for the fabulous desserts. Of course, Peat is still raving about the rest of the food, as well as how hospitable and friendly and welcoming everyone was. Maybe some day we’ll leave Cassie with her grandparents and go hang out in the Largo de Camões and get drunk on ginja with all the college kids. But only after gorging ourselves on Portuguese pastries!

    Posted on November 15, 2010 at 11:40 pm by PeatB
    Filed under Life, Portugal, Uncategorized, World Traveler
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    Czech Out This Cover

    Back from Portugal. It was an amazing trip, and as soon as I get the pictures together, we’ll post them here on the blog with links to the various interviews and events.

    In the meantime, it seems Pouštní Kopí,the Czech translation of The Desert Spear has just been released, according to this article I found on Google (click here for an English translation).

    They included a shot of the cover:

    Like in most markets, my Czech publishers, Triton Publishing, were wise enough to know an awesome cover when they saw it, and go with the Larry Rostant painting that has graced The Desert Spear almost everywhere. Still, they added their own touches, including the wards and darkening the overall color scheme in a way I think looks really good. I am psyched to get my sample copies.

    Posted on November 15, 2010 at 6:29 pm by PeatB
    Filed under Czech, Desert Spear, Portugal, Sales, World Traveler, Writing
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    Portuguese Signing and Interview

    Today at 6:00pm (changed from 6:30) Portuguese time, I’m doing a signing:

    Come out and say hi!

    Also, here’s a brief interview (in English with Portuguese subtitles) in which I discuss the role of fear in my books, character growth, and the movie:

    Posted on November 12, 2010 at 11:27 am by PeatB
    Filed under Appearances, Craft, Desert Spear, Events, Interviews, Portugal, The Daylight War, Warded Man, World Traveler, Writing
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    Living it up in Lisbon

    I have just traversed the Atlantic for my first trip to Portugal!

    I’ve arrived bright and early Wednesday morning, at which time I met my Portuguese editor, Pedro Reisinho, who has set up a whirlwind week for me:

    Wednesday, Nov. 10th: Arrive, settle in, sightseeing in Lisbon, search for Dani’s grandfather’s name carved into the side of a building (no joke!)

    Thursday, Nov. 11th: Various interviews with literary blogs; I will try not to sound too jetlagged.

    Friday, Nov. 12th: More interviews, plus a signing at 6:30pm at the FNAC in the shopping Colombo in Lisbon, followed by dinner with two fans who won an online contest!

    Saturday, Nov. 13th: All day at Forum Fantastico 2010! (Also known as Fantastic Forum in English) where I will have two appearances:

    12:00pm – The Mechanics of Writing Fantastic (III) – “Characters and Characterization”

    7:00pm- In Conversation with Peter V. Brett, by Pedro Reisinho 

    **Update: Signings to follow both events**

    And Sunday, I return home to Brooklyn with gifts and candies (as directed by my wife). I’m really looking forward to this trip, though I’m hoping I won’t have to be frisked by Security like I was when I came home from World Fantasy. Hopefully my new haircut will make me look less threatening.

    Posted on November 10, 2010 at 8:02 am by PeatB
    Filed under Appearances, Events, Portugal, World Traveler
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